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Burning Bright
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Comment by link building on 07/18/14
PhtVka Really appreciate you sharing this post.Thanks Again. Cool. Comment by Silvia. on 08/31/11 This is the kind of story that we need. Very good story, you're a great writer. Comment by Stephen on 08/26/11 another great story !!!!!! we need more like this Comment by Mildredsen on 11/07/05 This story definitely showed some real talent! Obviously not a first attempt at writing for you. As an aspiring hack myself, I've got to award you style points for the ending. Hope to see more of your stuff.Be thee encouraged. Comment by sticky on 01/21/03 This is a very well-written story with a couple of clever twists. Jezzi Belle rightly points out that the TG element is almost secondary - and it is interesting that it is observed by the narrator, who is a woman, rather than a man transforming. The story made me think about identity in a way that very few other T* stories have done. Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 01/26/02 EXCELLENT!!! Certainly NOT like a sabrina comic! And a tiger, what an excellent choice. The TG aspect of this story is, I think, secondary to the implication of near infinite alternate realities within ourselves, and a portal to reach those alternatives - an addictive portal. One of the best stories I've read! Congratulations. Comment by Petra on 05/27/01 Like, WOW!!!!! Comment by Francesca Barrie on 02/16/01 A good intriguing story, I liked it. Comment by Paula Jutras on 02/09/01 Good story. Read a similiar story in a Sabrina comic where the Aunts reflection were male and made me think of writing a M2F tale but never got to it. I did enjoy your tale. |
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