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Bursting Out
by Jennifer White

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Comment by SassySue on 12/15/13
WARNING CONTAINS SPOILER.


With no new stories being posted for years, I've been re-reading some old ones by my favorite author, Jennifer White.  As you can tell from my prior review, this story is one of my favorites, especially because the wife at the end regrets taking the transformation too far.  I just wish Jennifer would post her new stories, including the ones in the queue, at some other site such as Fictionmania.tv or bigclosetr.us/topshelf/


Comment by Silvia    ( from Brazil) on 02/19/09
That is one of your best stories.
I really loved it!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by juliej on 07/22/07
3rd time reading brilliant well done

Comment by julie j on 01/02/05
as per previous comments but intresting second read around

Comment by julie j on 07/27/04
i like the story it was well explanied &written I was not suprised that at the end they seperated but it prooves the point that some creams etc work well done

Comment by Cassandra on 04/26/04
Dear Jennifer,

I have previously posted comments to this story. I still stand by them buy did really want to add a thought.  As I read through this story, the thought occurred to me that I'd read this before only in a different context. I hunted around  and found your "Within Melanie". I loved that story when I read it also. The feminine side within being brought into focus and taking charge is one you have explored very, very well.

Cassandra

Comment by Bobbie on 04/23/04
I truly enjoyd this story.  It is unfortunate that Chuck probably unknown to his wife began to totaly enjoy the feminine feelings he
was receiving and it was too late to hold the process at the level
she desired.
On the other hand as in many cases George maybe the answer, if not she should not be hesitant to coninue to look for the dsesired companion.

Keep up the good works they are so much more plesant than shipping
the unfortunate subject off to some clinic for extensive reprograming.

Comment by SassySue on 04/23/04
A great story well told by an exceptional writer.  I personally much prefer this type of slow change that could be possible in reality then Jennifer's many magical transformation stories.  Here when the change occurs it is still very "magical".

I also enjoy stories that focus on manly heterosexual lovemaking.

Keep up the good work.

SS

Comment by Cassandra on 04/23/04
Jennifer, dear,

This is a totally delightful story told only in the way you can say it. Sharon was such a wonderful teacher with a well-thought out plan going slow, just one step at a time. Only there was one problem; she was too good a teacher.

I'm with Jezzi on this. Be careful, very careful what you wish for.

Cassandra

Comment by Gina La VaLampe on 04/23/04
Jennifer, What a marvelous story! The deceptive plan angle and his slip-sliding away into a sea of femininity- what a wonderful fantasy.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 04/23/04
Good story!  The girl becomes a victim of her own scheming while the guy she's feminizing comes to enjoy "her" femininity and doesn't want her anymore.  Be careful what you wish for.



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