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Business Trip
by ForeverCD

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Comment by This Site on 02/01/17
PHSLJy Thanks a whole lot for sharing this with all of us you essentially know what you will be speaking about! Bookmarked. Kindly also visit my web page =). We could have a link exchange contract among us!

Comment by crorkz matz on 08/04/14
vfoi5T I really liked your article.Much thanks again. Awesome.

Comment by ashley on 01/15/14
What a agreat story.

Comment by Bruce on 03/29/09
damn what a night, i believe you can expand this for another Barbara business trip and see what happens with Barbara and these two fantastic women....very very well done...thanks for the ride on your imaginary rollercoaster

Comment by Annie on 03/02/09
what a great story would love to be in that situation

Comment by TiffFox on 07/18/04
Very good

surprisingly good buildup (so many stories rush to the end when there's sex involved)

I was surprised that the laies didn't figure out a way to make sure barbara had to see them again



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