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The Business Trip
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Comment by greta on 01/29/09
I liked the story but mentioning in the beginning he was married to Joan and not involving her at all seemed to me rather strange. You could have added this part and I believe it would have been even more interesting. Like Suzanne showing her how good it is turning your hubby into the company sissy and maybe the Maid at home. Comment by Priscilla Ann on 03/25/08 Wonderful story of subjugation, followed by a delightful fashion show to end all fashion shows. Marvelous. Thank you, Ms. Knight. I do hope there is more to come (or cum). Comment by Lee on 09/07/07 Are we going to have a sequel to this it is a great story? Comment by Lee on 07/08/07 I love this story specially the bit under desk. Thank you for a great story that was well written Comment by w on 03/05/07 Ms. Knight, |
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