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The Business Woman (A LAMBS Story)
by Anyport

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Comment by Hendra on 07/09/12
Hi !My name is Ellie,I go to Spratton C of E Primary School, I live in Creaton With my brother and my mum and dad. I have a dog caelld Lolly and a cat caelld puss, I am 9 years old and my birthday is on the 13th of November. My hobbies are football, arts and craft and bike riding.I go to lots of clubs in school, I go to mathletics, gardening, art and textiles . I go to some out of school as well like cubs, pilots and football.My favouite food is spaghetti  bolognaise, but when I go on holiday to Norfolk I love fish and chips because it is near the sea so the fish is realy nice!My best friends are Issie, Ruby, Ayesha, Dilon and Ella                                                    From Ellie!

Comment by Silvia. on 10/12/10
WOW! What a bad story you wrote!

Comment by Lesley on 12/18/00
I enjoy all of your stories.  The Business Woman is one of favorite ones though.  

Comment by Paul jutras on 12/02/00
For my story taste the second LAMBS story was a bit long for me but I enjoyed the scan reading of it that I did.



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