I don't have much to add to what Diane, Jezzi and Briar have already written. I too enjoyed this story a lot, but thought the ending might be a little too far-fetched (unless Kris was a true hermaphrodite to begin with) and that the summer "punishment" did not fit the "crime".  However, it was thoroughly acceptable as fantasy.  The kissing scene with the member of Kiss and Kris' reaction to it was priceless.  Other scenes were also well done without being overly detailed about make-up, curling, waxing, etc.  Overall, an enjoyable, well-written read.  Thanks to Ilene for writing and posting it.

SS

This arictle is a home run, pure and simple!

I kind of agree with Miss Stewart about this story.  It is very well written, and although some of the events in it are really impossible, in the story they are made to seem possible, so it is all believable within the tale, which means it is a good story.  I too come back and re-read it, every so often, so it must have something about it.  I think that Ilean has written it very well, and is to be thanked for sharing it with everyone.

Briar

I obviously have a love/hate relationship with this story.  It makes me angry with mom and crew every time I read it, but I keep re-reading it.  

My opinion is still the same.  The events in the principals office change everything. The good guys become the bad guys when they punish him more for doing the right thing than for when he did the wrong things ... and then lie to him to boot. AND then pretend they care about him.

After the principals office, they should have given HIM a chance; when they didn't, he should have taken the run away option.  

This is a good story - seems like every two years I read it again.  I do stand by my original remarks though.  Up till the scene in the principal's office, I feel he deserved what he got.  The continued punishment after he had done the right thing was totally unfair; I totally reversed my opinion of who the good guys and bad guys were.  I would have liked to see him take the run away option.  I wonder what mom would have done if he had said when offered the options, "OK, I won't rat you out, but I'm outta here."  He didn't, but then when mom lied to him him and they pulled the pregnancy thing on him without warning, given the previous response to him being a nice guy, I think he should have turned mom, the sisters, and the doc in for child abuse; the doc should have been prosecuted for deliberate malpractice too.

I just re-read this very well written story, but I stand by my original comments.  Up till the scene in the principal's office, I sympathized with mom and sis; he deserved what he was getting.  But then he did THE RIGHT THING.  He could have brought the whole thing down and gotten revenge but he didn't.  And they went ahead and kept punishing him anyway.  Punishment for bad behavior ... and good??? Sorry, but, at that point my sympathies turned 180 degrees.  

This was off da' chain man. You gotta' make more stuff like this.

Decidedly erotic! I enjoyed the increasing femininity experienced by the protagonist. The breast-feeding sequences were exceptional. I also enjoyed her sexual conquest at the hands of her old buddy. Ohhh Baby!

Any one Who dose not like a story line should stop and find a story he/she likes. Over what you might think of the story line, its still a well writen story, and yes the author dose have a dark sense of humor.

I felt torn reading this.  The little shit desereved what he got, and given the way you had described him, I was surprised when he didn't blow the whistle on his family.  After he didn't, though, I thought it was really rotten of his mom to continue the plan.  I think they should have let him go back to being a boy and see how he behaved.  Given that they didn't,  I think he should have secretly prepared and then taken the run away option.

I don't like TG stories with vivid sex scenes. Reminds me of the perverts that no one in this lifestyle wants to be associated with. So, with the exception of the initial rape, I passed over the other sex scenes and even at that this was still a complete story. As a Post op TS since 1969, I have lived the life of a barren heterosexual female, without any fetishes. If I can live like that what is wrong with the rest of the transgendered community? Too much sex and not enough feeling in today's stories, which makes me think that ninety-nine point nine per cent of the transgendered community are nothing but perverts, and wish to live that filty life without regard for what is decent and moral.

That is what this story reminds me of.

And just because you get rave reviews from readers, doesn't mean anything because only a sick and perverted mind would think this story great. I DO NOT!

Barb

You have some of my favorite stories in your group. Love them. I hope it is alright to give a blanket feedback. loved the pregnant boy one. Keep up the good work, and more ideas to you.

Wooie, this was such a well writen story. I truely enjoyed every word of it.

I especially liked the way the author brought this little boy to the point of experiencing the effects of womanhood.

I'll surely take the time to read more of her work.

Most of it is a believeable story with only the very ending a little too much for me to go along with. But, who knows anything may be possible nowadays.

I'm glad I found this story and hope many others find the story as interesting as I have found it.