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The Butterfly
by Annie Larson

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Comment by Royal CBD on 06/30/21

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Comment by Robert on 10/14/20

I really enjoyed this story but the story is no longer posted on fictionmania.tv. Is there any place that can acquire this story or find it online?

Comment by mia pron khalifa on 10/25/19

iSP5rT Really appreciate you sharing this article.Really looking forward to read more. Want more.

Comment by Annie Larson on 02/07/16

For those interested, I've written much, much more, and it is posted at fictionmania.tv.
All of my writing has been in a similar style to this - sweet, sentimental, and perhaps a little witty.
My extensive writing has been the Summer Time story, and its sequel, the Babbling Brooke series of stories. Please check them out. I'd love to hear your thoughts on them. Thank you!
Hugs, Annie

Comment by only for 5 dollars on 09/12/13

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Comment by Silvia. on 10/01/10

Hi Annie.
Lovely and sweet story!
I liked it a lot.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Abbie on 01/26/08

Hmmmmmm--- shoes or the girl?

Comment by Matt on 07/27/07

Nice story, it was very sweet!

Comment by Rone on 05/19/06

Lovely sweet story ... the ending was most unexpted ..I will not give it away ...you must read it yourself ...it is worth the time
the author has a talent that shows sensitivity and insight well written and well done ....
thank you Rone..

Comment by Early June on 05/06/06

Wow! A sweet transformation. nice tale telling. The family you described sounds very loving and wholesome. This would have been good reading even if there were no transgender in it. But that certainy did add to the tension. Thank you for sharing this delightful composition with us.

Comment by juliej on 05/05/06

this story is a nice sweet one with the leading part playing as if he was a girl forever this story again i will re read at a later date

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