while I totally agree that Bryon should be taught a lesson, and this is the way to do it, I was wondering about what would happen if things went a little too far, and she didn't want to change back, refused to in fact. How would his/her wife react to that?

More! More please,hurry. This is too good not to finish!

                    Vivien

Where is the rest? Please don't leave us hanging.Great beginnings.

Looking for continuation of story. just getting interesting.

Good start -- I'll ignore those little faux pas, i.e., "christmas."
 "Byron" sounds like a candidate for the "CCC" treatment, but a "'maid' over" could be great. In the 1930's, men were such chauvinists, and I assume this is the time period of the story?

I love the idea of using the illustrations for each story part and the story itself is literate and offers endless possible outcomes. Well done, Jezzi! Can't wait for the next part, which isn't too far down the queue. Hugs, Abby

 An interesting start, though so far the introduction holds more promise than the story does substance.  I do suspect you will remedy that in the near future.  Kisses Rhonda

Ah, my Dear Jezzi, my cup runneth over.  When I saw your new story tonight, I knew that I was in for my usual treat.  Great start as usual.  I am so-o-o happy to see you still entertaining us.  With most sincere thanks for your past, present and future works--Sharlee