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Cabin Boy to Cabin Lass
by Amanda Whipp

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Comment by me suba on 12/20/18

emC9Ee Major thankies for the article.Really thank you! Want more.

Comment by Silvia. on 06/15/10

Very bad story. Anything forced is good and fair.
Silvia.

Comment by Samantha on 12/11/09

Cool story. But memsahib actually means mistress. The "cabin lass" would call the englishman sahib. Nice concept though

Comment by john on 05/10/08

keep it coming. Great story.

Comment by john on 05/09/08

so onto day 2 - - - mmmmmmmmmm

Comment by john on 05/09/08

now on to part 2. Good one

Comment by Pauline Brendon on 10/11/07

Birmingham Shipworking Docks????????????????????
This is as far from the sea as one can go, or is my Geography all mixed up?????

Comment by Sarah on 07/10/07

Jane is correct, HMS would be His (or Her) Majesties Ship and pretty much used for the Royal Navy.
This would be an SS or RMS, but either way a good start. Any chance of some more?

Comment by R.A. Nash on 03/10/07

Very mice! I hope there is more, soon!

Comment by Bobbie on 09/03/04

Ja very nice, love that they both enjoyed.
Guess to easy going but the first time is always the best.

Comment by leah on 09/01/04

Nitpick dept.: Memsahib means Mistress. Our cabinlass surely would say Sahib to the well-hung Englishman. -- And by the way, I surely missed crinolines or some sort of spreading underskirt in the dressing scene.

I'm not sure how well-endowed this guy is, because, although you have him go to some pains to prepare his "lass," the actual deflowering seems to have had much less an uncomfortable effect on the recipient of the activity than one might imagine. In itself, that's not bad, but perhaps not so realistic.

Well, I suppose we have two weeks of debauchery coming up (I don't deny that it's exciting.), but I wonder what then. We know the Englishman enjoyed his late wife in all orifices, so he'll hardly be satisfied with less over the long run. (Or will he?) Looks like the cabin-help will be cast off like a well-used sponge or last week's newspaper.

Ah, c'mon, surprise us. (But don't be in too big a hurry; getting there is (more than) half the fun.)

Comment by Jane Hudson on 08/21/04

Good start .HMS is that not a Royal Navy ship not a passinger ship. Most Merchant ships are ss Steam Ship MV Motor Vessal RMS Royal Mail Ship BUT I MAY BE WRONG

Comment by Annabel on 08/20/04

Hi Amanda
A very nice start to a serial and a very realistic scenario.
I enjoyed the story - I thought the repetetive threats worked particularly well.
I am looking forward to further installments.
Hugs Annabel

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