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A Cab Ride
by Ann O'Nonymous

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Comment by Stephen on 07/07/11

 I lost a brother  to suicide , such  a waste !!! A permanent solution to a temporary problem !
           the Poem  "Richard Cory " comes to mind .......
as usual your well crafted words stirred emotions and thoughts ,evoked tears  and frustration .....the mark of a true author !!!

Comment by Early June on 10/15/05
Your skill with words shines clearly through the emotions this piece stirs.   I have been told the measure of a good writer relates to the degree of involvement the work can draw from the reader.  This is obviously a great work.  I am weeping from pain I have long thought to be salved. Thanks again for the work you have shared.  I hope, that with time, your pain may be lessened.

Comment by julie j on 03/15/05
a change again the story is intresting but i can understand the way it goes its a pity it ws so short but i think that it was very good and tthe cabbie did not twig very intresting i feel more could be done with story but it shows heartbreak at its best i wonder if i would due the same if it was the same circumstances  well done but please next time a bit longer thankyou

Comment by Jodie Anderson on 03/19/04
Interesting idea--but I find life more interesting than death.   And doesn't it take more courage to move on?

Jodie

Comment by robin on 03/13/04
That was a lovely and different story.  A good story is always a joy but, this was GREAT.

Comment by Tina Michelle Smith on 03/12/04
Oh, my dear, what a sad but beautiful story.  I can only think about how I would feel if I lost my Dear Wife.  I know I'm going to cry thinking about this tonight.  I already am.  I think I'm going to log off this foolish computer and go hug her.  Thank you, Ann.

Comment by Jane Hudson on 03/11/04
So sad sweet my dears  but just so sad.

Comment by jimmyinwhite on 03/11/04
So Sad So Strong. I can't get the tears to stop. I wouldn't want someone to do that over loosing me. I would hope that they could find love after i'm gone.

Comment by Sharlee Snyder on 03/10/04
Ann, thank you for writing this!  As I type this I am sobbing because for me it was a National Cemetary, and my beloved is waiting there for me.  That was over four years ago and I still do not know yet, why I didn't pull the trigger.  It still is agony!  Ann, what you said here needed to be said for so many of us.  I love all your work--Sharlee Snyder

Comment by Nellie D on 03/10/04
This one ended very sadly, but it showed how human nature can be. Grief can destroy just as surely as hate. Only the ones that have lost a loved one, whether spouse, parent, sibling or child; can understand the despair that is felt.



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