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Caitlin Knows Best
by Donna Dee

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Comment by CINDERS on 01/07/18
Absolutely wonderful. Needs a continuing story. Maybe another boy to be a sister to help with the business.

Comment by MaryLou on 06/24/09
What a sweet story; it read "real."

Comment by MaryLou on 06/24/09
What an orderly progression of ideas and action! Very well done.

Comment by Maybelle on 06/24/09
Needs the rest of the story

Comment by Aleesha on 01/13/09
I enjoyed your story very much it was perha[ps a little too short. Thanks.

Comment by juliej on 08/04/06
a brilliant story well worth reading ita a pity it was not a lot longer please write more to this one their is so much you can do to it

Comment by cassandra on 08/10/03
Dear, this is so wonderful, I can hardly believe you have left this dangling for sooo long. Please, please pick up this story. The promise seems very, very good.

Comment by Barbara Lynn Terry on 03/02/03
Donna this is a superb story. I enjoyed it very much. keep up the good work.

Barbara Lynn Terry

Comment by terri on 02/08/03
dear donna you simple must develop this tale it is gorgeous it such a lovely story, i look forward to the next instalment, love terri

Comment by Mardee Louise Prynne on 01/14/03
Ms. Dee continues to produce gems.  The charatcers are well drawn with intriguing but not overly complex plots. Details add to the eroticism.  The main failing, if that's what it is, is that the readers are left wanting more.  I'm not usually a fan of long series but I would love to read more of the further adventures of the fascinating characters who live in the world that Donna Dee has so ably created.
Mardee Louise Prynne



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