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The Camp Fire Girl
by Deborah Leigh Johnson

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Comment by Ric on 01/17/13
This is one of the most well constructed, erotic and just plain hot stories I have ever read!!!

You have the ability to put me there, in the story....


Comment by Laura on 02/28/11
Enjoyed your story -- especially its length and the depth of its story line.  You even worked in some sub-plots -- really enjoyed your style.

Comment by Rone Welles on 09/30/09
I don,t know why others dont leave messages for you ,
this story is well written and good fun reading ...
loved the ending  ..well done .. thank you Rone ;)

Comment by Sissy Priscilla Valentine on 08/23/01
"Sing Around the Campfire, Join the Campfire Girls!"  Deb your story is soooooooooo hot! How I envy Brenda her sister and boyfriend, but especially the privilege they bestowed upon her; the ability to feel like a real little girl!  What a WONDERFUL story!    I must go grab my Jergins and my toy and finish off what you started! Hoo HOOOO! :-)

Kisses!

Sissy Prissy
XOXOX

Comment by Paula Jutras on 02/08/01
remind me of how I wish I could of been in the girlscouts instead of cub scouts.



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