nZlK6R Im no professional, but I imagine you just made an excellent point. You clearly comprehend what youre talking about, and I can really get behind that. Thanks for staying so upfront and so genuine.

To those that wanted to know how this story ends.
You can find the rest of the tale on a site called big closet.
If you are part of the community you know of the place.

Be warned the tales goes fast from  this point.
It is one of Pamela's greatest works.

But, I personally would have liked to see the camp and after periods more filled out.
Part is the feeling, 'is that it' and part is 'Penny and Lauren (plus most of the others <pre-camp> is never addressed)'.

V32IpK Very informative article.

It's now 2013 and we still don't know whether Lauren was found out.  Did she make it to the Cotillion?   Did Lorin managed to persuade Penny to enjoy his femininity?  Will we ever find out?  I hope so.  This is such a lovely story I was so disappointed at the end of Chapter 12.

Please Pamela if you read this, could you PLEASE put us out of our misery!

Pamela, please continue. It is now 1:15 AM and I just finished chapter 16. I do hope that we do not have to wait too long for "the rest of the story".
While growing up I had many dreams just like Lauren. In Junior High it hurt when I realized I would not grow like the other girls. I had so wanted to fit in. I still do want to fit into that wonderful world of womanhood and work on it as often as I can.
May Lauren come home from a happy and extremely fulfilling summer and grow into high school and beyond as she desires.

Nice to see this moving forward again, though I'm a little concerned by the depiction of Lauren here as even weaker, physically, than the genetic girls her age.  Makes me wonder if there's something medically wrong with her, gender dysphoria aside.

Eric

Have faith, Cathy.  Pamela just posted two new chapters a month ago.  I'm confident that we'll all get to learn what happens to Lauren. Sure, it can be agonizing waiting so long between chapters, but masterpieces take time :)

Stef

I wish Pamela would finish camp shoni, too bad it will never be finished, I hope she feels okay

Does Lorin get the bras he wants? is the story complete? I hope so, great writing keep it up. I wish YOU PEACE AND HAPPINESS,. GREAT STORY.

These are nit picks Lorin is refered to as Blake a couple of times and his sister is first introduced as Jenny. you might want to fix those. Aside from that Bravo I've made it to Chapter 9 and egarly reading the rest.

JB

I just finished chapter two it is getting very interesting, i wonder how he is going to get the clothes he needs.

THANK GOODNESS this story is continueing.  I was entranced when I read it a year ago, and thought the author had given up on it.  Now that it's back, I remember why I loved the previous installments.  Please, please, please, continue posting installments of this lovely, well written story!

Wow, no sooner did I leave my previous comment then I see that Chapter 14 has been posted.  I think this was the best chapter yet.  Poor Lauren, really enjoying her girlhood but soon to be busted by both Owen and Marilyn.  I hope they don't blow the whistle on her because Lauren deserves to experience the Cotillion before the s**t hits the fan.  Thank you, Pamela!

Camp Shoni lives!  Pamela, what a wonderful surprise to see a new chapter after waiting for over a year.  As always, your writing is superb.  Wouldn't it be ironic for Lauren and Marcie to wind up together, a boy who feels like a girl and a girl who, apparently, feels like a boy.  Whatever happens, I can't tell you how much I've enjoyed this story and I sure hope you'll stick with it 'til the end.

Stef

when is the rest of the story coming out

Almost amazing how tense I get while reading this story -- and Lauren hasn't even checked in at camp yet...

I am absolutely mesmerized by your story and your writing style... I suppose i might be more critical if I was not as enthusiastic about your subject matter...
Although I am not quite as ambitious as your young hero/heroine.. i have experienced much of his attraction to all things feminine and therefore mysterious and wonderful....

Read all eight parts and can't wait for more.  You have done a good job with the story plot.  I was wondering how Lorin was going to pull it off, but the help from the store clerk and how that came about flowed smoothly together. Now to see it in action!

Just read part one and it seems like this is going to be a good story.  The only thing I found a bit weak, and I am nitpicking here, is the excuse of why Lorin is not going to Asia with his family.  The thing about the food was weak as you can get a McDonald's hamburger if you want.  To tell your son that he can't go on a trip to Asia because he is a picky eater is just crazy as hell.  How in the world would you just toss your son out of a once in a lifetime holiday for him?  If it was me, I would work at thinking of a better reason than the food bit.  You can always do a rewrite and repost to the story site; writers do it all the time.  

Other than the above, I think I will continue to read to see how Lorin expects to pull off living as a girl at camp 24/7 when it appears that he has never even so much as worn his sister's knickers before now.

Maybe one should have chosen a different title for this one - episode 8 already and he STILL has not arrived there!  The story is fine, but it is moving a bit too slowly.

<Smiles> It's me Pamela,

YES!  Still reading the story and waiting for more.

Hugs, Fran

Hey I love the story it seems it takes you a while to write them though yes I understand the slow postings of the stories but it would be nice if you can get them here sooner so they can get posted sooner.  Anyways thanks for the stories your pretty talented as a writer.

I simply love your stories! Transforming a young boy into a girl is very fascinating (I do hope I spell the words right). And the way you describe it... I just love it! A matter of fact, I wish you can do further stories as well on Charlottes Niece and Girls Only Club stories that you already have done! I mean its very popular in the movies to make a follover...
Anyway, as I already said: I love your stories and I do hope you'll continuing writing your stories in the same way, but don´t be afraid to make some very unhappy endings to it.
Love, BB

Glad i waited for mutli parts to of gotten posted before reading so I can really get into and enjoy such a wonderful tale.

Pamela:

   The tension is building to quite a fevered pitch. I really like this story intensely and can identify with it quite easily. I really see some great things happening and though I am worried about bad things that might happen, I will definitely continue to read about Lorin/Lauren. Please keep going.

   Hugs,

   Kristi

Looking forward to the next chapter.  He's got quite a lot to do, with high odds of getting caught.

I'm so glad you continued writing this - it's one of the better stories I've read here in a while. Please please please continue :-)

Okay, I'm hooked now.  Please continue!!!

Pamela,

This is a very realistic story! I felt like I was sweating bullets with him there in the lingerie department.  I loved his confusion trying to decypher the mysteries of bra sizing!  

I wonder if he is going to get any help from Penny or Cindy?  Will the lock on that diary hold up?   And he hasn't even gotten to camp yet!

Terrific story.  Thanks

fregen

I loved both parts so far- it is very complex without being boring at all.  can hardly wait for part 3.

Dear Pamela:

   Very lovely story and really starting to shape up. I like all the internal dialog and conflict as teens are defintely conflicted. His uncertainty and yet his daring will bring him through his chance to see how the other half lives. It would happen anyway, sooner or later, with this strong of a desire. I hope he isn't badly hurt.

   It would be wonderful if his parents really addressed his concerns and got involved in a good way.  I think the direction here is fresh in that he really doesn't know what he is doing and things don't look simple at all. Real life never is. Your story by mirroring real life has much more power than the usual. I very highly recommend this story.

Hugs,

Kristi

after part 2

A VERY well written story!  I'm betting his mom knows and is just seeing how far "Lauren" will go.  Every mom looks at her own child's name; it would be almost impossible for her not to notice the name change on the envelope.  Even if she thought it was a mistake, it would cause her to look at the rest of the envelope and notice it was not from Camp Dan.

Hi Pamela  :)

Another great story coming my way I see.  :-)
Thank you

Hugs, Fran

Great begining.  I can't wait tfor the next chapter.