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  I think your story was fantastic. I would like to read the ending though? It is ok to keep the reader in suspence. but not for to long.

A good imaginative story but like the other readers I believe you should continue this story.

I think Can-Can dancing, perhaps along with belly dancing, is just about the most gloriously radiant possible celebration of everything that could be considered "femininity".  Tightly-wound long hair, face makeup, bare shoulders, laced boots,strained gartered stockings, insanely layered and  overstuffed skirts, and, best of all, panties, panties, panties, and legs, legs, legs! Ooooooooooo La La! What young girl (or even young boy)wouldn't want to do that at least once to revel in the preciousness of it all? How dare they make that expolitative.  Oui, mon cherie...........

This was a nice, cheerful story. Nice details. However, that last paragraph calls for a part two. Unless, perhaps, you were actually writing about what has happended to you and the last part is still in the imagination.

Susan

A good start, looking forward to seeing how this develops

I love the story. I hope you can add to it as there seems to be a lot of potential for development.

Hugs, Broni

So far, so good.  I liked the fact that this was G rated; so many stories like this launch into gay sex immediately.  I certainly hope there is a part 2.  I would like to know more about our hero(ine) (name?) and how he became able to do all the can can moves.  Maybe you could have Pete innocently put him in the position of having to actually be a can can girl in a community theatre production.  You didn't mention makeup; maybe again arrange circumstances to get him into a transformation salon for a teahing makeover.  How about the glued on breast forms "they won't come off for a month bit." Or an accidental perm?  Gettintg his mom involved?  Just some ideas.