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Candice
by Jennifer White

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Comment by this is me on 07/31/12
Once again... if she wanted her husband she would try to shock himi before medicating him. If estrogen is so much of a mind control substance she would have reversed the order that is if she had a logical bone in her body. I'm still not sold that estrogen in a normal dose is as mentally reconditioning as these stories attest. Seldom do these stories synchronize the application of the hormone with a reasonable time factor for their efficacy.

Comment by WannabeGinger on 07/04/08
Love the lesbian angle....  Soooooo true to life for some of us!
LOL WbG.  xxx

Comment by Dianna on 03/09/08
I have to say I'm rather satisfied with how this worked out. I thought I wouldn't like it, but I did. Feminization with consequences, yet a happy ending. Good job sugar!

Comment by Bobbie on 12/21/03
Excellent story hits the nail on the head regarding making the decission. It is definitely something to consider before making
that first step.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 11/21/03
a good case of "be careful what you wish for, BUT with a happy ending.  GREAT!

Comment by Jane Hudson on 11/20/03
Great story loved it keep on with the great story telling

Comment by Debrah on 11/20/03
This is the first time I have ever commented on any story. I did enjoy it very much and I thank you for the effort you put forth in writing it.

Comment by Sheryl S. on 11/20/03
Subtly seductive in an interesting way, Jennifer.  Generally, it's in keeping with your established style and themes, and ironies.  Your body of works is steeped in divine irony, and this is no exception. It is one of your more realistic pieces, but you've done that before, but there is a subtle blooming and evolution of your style reflected here that is hauntingly memorable.  I'd love to see you work on more variations of these themes -- perhaps a multi-parter where you could allow more time for character development.  However you choose to build on this story, good luck!  Hugggz!



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