We both die end of story .

Bravo, Ms. Chambers. Perfect retribution and suffering for a former macho idiot. And a nice touch having Candy recall all things, but control none

Poor, poor brett, I mean poor Candi. She is being forced to experience exactly what she tried to put her former female employees through. Best of all, she is fully aware of who she was and what she is now. And those very, very short skirts with stockings and garters instead of pantyhose with nice six-inch stiletto heels are simply perfect choices of attire for the bimbo she has become. Ms. Chambers has done a remarkable job of having Candi's boss Linda exact the perfect punishment on the overbearing male brett once was. Bravo

I just re-read this story and it occured to me that it may well have been a mistake on Linda's part to release Brett and allow him to be in controll - particularly if she can't put Candy back in charge.  Candace (Candy body / Brett mind) may now realize from the Bob episode how much power she has over men.  At least it seemed to me that in that episode, Bob was the object Candy used for her pleasure.  My new scenario is Candace pretends to be Candy for awhile while she gets used to Candy's girl skills, then quits and disappears.  She surfaces in a city on the otherside of the country and quickly manipulates corporate big shots in such a way that she soon becomes a rich and powerful CEO of several corporations, one of which buys out Merry Kay.  Linda is given CDs to watch supposedly to learn about the company changeover, but in reality they are hypnodiscs similar to those she used on Brett.  Linda ends up as Candace's bimbo secretary and unwilling submissive lesbian lover.  OH, just so the bad guy doesn't win.  Candace soon gets run over by a car.  With her death, all Linda's conditioning is cancelled.  She finds out that in a guilt-easing gesture, Cabdace had left everything to her in her will.  :-)

I agree with Jezzi...however, I would trash the masculine pronouns...Brett is now female and the pronouns should be used to reflect that...regardless of what the mind is...I also would like to see a continuation of this story with Brett either being fired after being brought out of hynosis...or Linda helping her to redeem herself and become a lady...I also agree that this first part ended to quickly. Another thing...I am a stock holder in Mary Kay, Inc., and I thought it was not kosher, as they say, to use the name of Merry Kay. Some people ever got wind of this at Mary kay, Inc., they might not take to it kindly. This is just a thought, but maybe you could try some other type of name. Just a thought. Nice story though.

Barbara Lynn Terry

I loved the story, the whole idea of being trapped in your own different body was great. Brett having to watch him/herself have sex with that guy was a nice touch. Would like to see more stories like this from you.

Great story. like the idea of being a passenger in his own body to add to him getting what he deserves.

You know whenever I see you have written another story I smile and get excited because I know it will be a masterpiece.  You are really great at creating these stories.  I really loved this one and I hope you post more stories like this real soon.  :)  You and Candy is my idol! :)

Great story, though Jez has a point in her review.  You really are the master of these kinds of stories.  Sometime, try one where there's no hypnosis, maybe something like blackmail.  But this one was another masterpiece.

Good story; Brett got what he deserved.  However, the story ended too soon.  I would have loved to see how BRETT coped without the Candy personality.  

Personal Preference:  I would like to see her accept the error of Brett's ways, accept her womanhood, and try to become a lady.  I would hope that Linda would favor redemption over revenge and help when she realizes CANDICE (not Candy) was sincere  OR it might be more of a roller coaster ride if Linda fired her and she was on her own to overcome the bimbo and become a lady.