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Career Shift
by Marty S

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Comment by Silvia      (from Brazil) on 11/05/09
WOW ! This is a great and good story, amazing!
I really loved the story.
A lot of kisses and hugs!
Silvia.

Comment by mike on 06/03/09
dream job and a excellent career shift.an invitation to a totally different life.who would refuse the magnificent shaft of natalie.wonderful!

Comment by Carolyn Renee on 04/16/08
Lovely story! Please do not change your story lines -- I am so jealous! Are ther any more positions in Go Girl magazine?  Love & Kisses  Carolyn Renee

Comment by jo on 01/03/03
your stories are good starts, but you need to stretch them out a bit. I like the action and feel you could extend the story line longer. For example your halloween party could be turned into a series of cross dressing adventures. I appreciate that you stay away from femdom, magical and sci fi themes. I like the almost possible situations and the lack of worrying about appearances and outcomes.

keep them coming



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