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Careful What You Wish For
by Joyce Devries

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Comment by Caroline on 08/17/03
Hi,
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story and look forward to returning to read the continuation.  The theme almost exactly matches my own recurring fantasy (alas, for me it will remain just that)but I would like to read about Joyce being introduced to higher heels. Also, perhaps, we could have Brenda and Joyce making it together while Brad has Sharon just to add a little extra variety. I will keep coming back anyway to see what transpires. Good luck and don't keep us waiting too long!
Caroline.

Comment by Paula on 07/03/03
Not sure if Jennifer was meant to be Joyce in the E-mail or that is a name change so not to use you wife real name. Other than that really enjoyed this totally sweet tale. Many Real women, TV's and TS' wishes they could be petite.

Comment by Reader on 07/03/03
Who is jennifer and why is the email addressed to her.. the name of the character is Joyce?

hmmm



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