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Carie's Mistake
by Margaret Jeanette

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Comment by Linda on 11/16/15
He provided her with everything to make her Business successful. It went to her head. Instead of pressing the issues especially the seating arrangements at the table. That was a little bit over kill. That's when he probably said to himself. This isn't right. She won't listen. Okay, I don't need this and as she threatened Divorce,  Okay, Go through the motions of a Divorce from her and when she sees where the chips are falling and she's going to lose her Business. Maybe she'll wake up to what she's Really losing.After all, He did go along with her "dolling" him up.He didn't object to wearing the Dress at first, She could have turned this into Role playing game with benefits. Having sex with him with him 'En Femme.  He'd have gone with it.I would have a different outcome. Reconciliation with him Feminized.  

Comment by Silvia    (from Brazil) on 10/24/09
Hi !
WOW ! Congratulations!
Now justice was made! I think you can write good stories!
I hope you keep writing stories like this one.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by DEE on 09/26/07
I GUESS ALL MAN ARE NOT FEMME. POINT TAKEN

Comment by julie j on 09/18/04
wonderfull very red faced was carrie a lesson taught the hard way well done to her husband &now she has lost everything well half of it its amazing what can be done with a little thought wonderful story

Comment by leah on 08/23/04
Well, red-faced I be. I knew this was Crystal's wonderful Story Site the instant after I pressed "Post Comments."

Comment by leah on 08/23/04
Honest, MJ, your character Jim may correspond to some real people, but I have never met any male like this. -- Especially one who when pushed far enough down the road to feminization suddenly discovers one more aspect of manhood. Actually, he seems to have accomplished what he finally did by using his previous virtues and skills while adopting a typically female approach to problem solving.

I have no problem with that inasmuch as it was a nice and unexpected twist to help create an ending. --- But you must admit that you have placed Carie and Jim from the very beginning in positions traditionally the reverse of what our society expects. --- Well, at Fictionmania you can expect applause for that; from me, too. --- I was rather disappointed in the way you chose to finish off this story. As I see it, it was fully up to you, and for myself I can say I'd rather have seen a reconciliation --- one with a "difference" I'd hope. It would be interesting to see how the company staff managed to deal with that.



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