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Carla's Toy
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Comment by ashley on 04/02/12
this really was a nicely done 2 parter. Now didn't that work out just nicely for all concerned? Comment by ashley on 04/01/12 nice one Comment by Silvia. on 09/13/10 I agree 100% with jezzi Belle on 08/14/10. Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 08/14/10 I just re-read this after 7 years and I stand by my 2003 comments. Without any kind of answer to the WHY? question, the women are just amoral sadistic bitches. Comment by ash on 04/30/10 Ok Iguess Comment by Night Wolf on 03/31/03 I can't say it was a good one or that it was a bad one for you see this was a bit confussing in where everything was going! I know that Carla would had to have the pictures if she knew about Judy yet They should have been brought in well talking to Tom just to prove that they were real instead you do leave it quite open to the readers to think it was still a bluff instead of real even if this is Fiction! Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 02/05/03 Yes, my first comment was a mistake; it is for "A Living Doll". Perhaps, though, it's a good thing it is posted here, because my reaction to this story is almost exactly the opposite. Comment by Frilliette on 02/05/03 Seeing now that there are only two parts, this story would have been better if published as a single piece. It could have been much better overall if the ending was not so rushed. Comment by Nellie D on 02/05/03 A different conclusion than what one might think from the first part. Different in a good sort of way. Thanks Ann Comment by Paula on 02/04/03 a wonderful sweet story and I love the choosen character names. Comment by Jodi on 02/04/03 A good beginning, but left me totally confused. I appreciate the use of cliffhangers to keep the readers coming back, but there are way too many loose ends. Nothing is explained, and the plot structure is lacking. Hope this will be corrected, starting with the next episode. Also, the meeting betwen Paul and Carla was too contrived and awkwardly handled. Concerning Frilliette's comment, I believe that Jezzi Belle accidentally posted a review to this story of Ann's last story, "A Loving Doll." Comment by Frilliette on 02/04/03 I'm not sure what story Jezzi read and is commenting on, but it's certainly not the one I just read, unless she's had a sneak preview of future parts of this story. Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 02/04/03 What a wonderful sweet story, so different from what I feared, having read some doll horror stories, and you did it all without one single sexual scene, word, or image. BRAVO, Annie! The doll as a catalyst for redeaming a wasted life and setting free "her" imprisoned femininity, WOW! I loved the image at the end of the two beautiful brides - and their children. One of the nicest stories I've read. Comment by Axanar on 02/04/03 I've come to the conclusion that you are UTTERLY INCAPABLE of writing a bad story. Comment by Nellie D on 02/04/03 A very nice beginning to an intriquing story. Where is it going? I'm sure Ann will show us as she unfolds the plot. |
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