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Carole
by Karen Anne Summerfield

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Comment by Maid Joy on 08/31/08
Karen Anne, this is one of the stories that you wrote that I have read over and over and over again.  It's beautiful and uplifting, true to life rather than total fantasy.  Please, if you are going to continue it, please do so.  I can't wait to see it.

Comment by Michele on 04/29/07
I hope you are going to continue this wonderful story

M


Comment by ElaineB on 10/21/04
This is a great story, well told, but with lots of room to explore and to grow.  I am a big fan of the sissy aspect, and would love to see this story explore more of the sissy nature of Carole.  After all, Carole IS a sissy, she knows it and deep in her heart, she adores being a sissy as well as a maid.  I think you touched on that some in the story, and you are such a talented writer, I would love to see you take Carole into her sissy nature, wherever her mistress might choose to lead her.  Either way, I like your writing and this story.  Thanks

Comment by Pippa K. on 10/20/04
Before reading part 3, I went back and re-read the first 2 parts.  I enjoyed them even more the second time than the first.  This has been a delightful series so far, and even though you don't have to (it's fine right where you left it), I hope you'll consider adding to it.

Comment by Cathy_t_ on 10/18/04
Now don't die from shock, Karen.  I know that ME commenting on one of your stories must be a shock, but I want to congratulate you on a tale well told.  Thus far you have justified every thought I've had about you truly being a good writer.  To change pace as you have done with this one has to be difficult and challenging, but you've handled it with grace and skill.  Mia complimente, and a well earned curtsy from Cathy_t_.

Comment by Jane Hudson on 10/16/04
Part 3 another hit well done

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 10/14/04
Very nice story and a pleasant change, a maid story filled with love and respect instead of humiliation and loathing.  Congrats and thanks for taking the road less traveled.

Comment by Marlene on 09/28/04
Hi Karen,
Just another compliment on these excellent stories. I agree with the others... please continue with Carole's new life.

Comment by Jane Hudson on 09/27/04
Love it my dear

Comment by Francine on 09/26/04
Hi Karen  :)

It looks like all the positive statements have been made.
Please continue the story.

Hugs, Fran

Comment by Samantha Jay on 09/19/04
Nice story and I agree with Miss Davies over the last part of the story. I wasn't ready for the jump and it confused me until I realised that it took place much later. Still, knowing you, I bet you could you add the discovery scene in a trice and I believe it would add to the story.

Love

Samantha

Comment by Jane Hudson on 09/14/04
As a TS  I know what it is to want to be feminine .I have never wanted to be a maid but this is a lovely story.

Comment by Samantha Michelle Davies on 09/13/04
Karen,
A lovely story with just the right pace even though I thought that the scene with her parents justified a fuller part. This was one thing that petrified me at his/her age and for many it takes a lot of guts to go through with 'Coming Out' in whatever way it happens. More please?!*!?
Samantha

Comment by Deidra on 09/13/04
Thanks Karen !!  

Nice to know you can still write Sweet and Sentimental stories.
Love it!!

Comment by SaraUK on 09/12/04
Hugs Karen
Thanks for the great story. its nice to see you can still turn out a nice one from time to time.
I hope you have some more story's to read soon.

HUGGLES!!!!!!!!!

SaraUK

Comment by slimv on 09/12/04
Thanks for the story Karen.  I enjoyed it.



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