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Car Park Ambush
by Anyport

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Comment by Elizabeth Cathryn Mystery on 10/10/23
Not a story I would read again but unfortunately things like this occur in the world.  It would have been interesting to know what designs Tricia had for Mark, but to go sidewards as she did indicates that at some point something sinister would have occurred.

Comment by Silvia. on 10/18/10
Bad story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Comment by anonymous on 04/12/10
astoundingly well written

Comment by juliej on 04/15/07
a heavy story that was very servere but a brilliant read well written

Comment by julie on 03/04/04
a good story heavy going had read it slowley it seems mark got what he wanted in a roundabout way butwith e attemped violance at the end a hard lesson learned

Comment by Robyn Marie on 12/25/00
At  last!  A story without all the abuse and humiliation - well, some,maybe -- but a nice pleasant ending.   The only way to improve on it would be a lot more detail about the pleasant ending, and not so much (small as it was)  emphasis on the bad things.  Thank you very much, and I hope to see more stories like it in the future.





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