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The Case of the Model Student
by Paul G Jutras

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Comment by Silvia. on 02/15/10
What a bad story!!!!!!!!
Silvia.

Comment by Shiraz on 07/13/09
Wasn't this one of the stories that made FictionMania close for a while. I like the story and the pics, but i don't want Storysite to disappear from the net, even for one day.

Comment by k mixon on 05/11/08
Hi;
  I like the story,and the illustrations. They are a nice touch.
I would have only made him like that for a while. No one would
have believed him,and the punishment has to fit the situation.
Good story

Comment by Karen Trexler on 01/02/08
Definitely one of those stories where the the fantasy of it is quite intense, but the facing the reality of it would be another story. I loved the illustrations!

Comment by Nicky on 08/11/03
Quite liked this one, especially the "morphing" photograph.  Presumably the headmistress should have said "This child is not a girl like last time"?  What about a prequel, featuring Amy and similar "photo-morphing" techniques?



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