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Caught
by Debra Rachel

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Comment by mia pron khalifa on 12/20/18
55Bytx Right away I am ready to do my breakfast, once having my breakfast coming yet again to read additional news.|

Comment by crorkz matz on 08/04/14
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Comment by Barbara Jo on 08/04/13
Oh honey, you have to write more on this story.  Roberta really needs to find her calling.

Comment by dawn on 10/16/12
please continue your story of "Bobbie" it was so lovely

Comment by Lola on 09/19/11
Articles like this are an example of quick, hleupfl answers.

Comment by Robb on 06/19/11
OMG  this story started so great yet after all these years you wrote no more on it . you are obviously very talented & write so well  Please please please  finish ths gem you began  

Comment by Aleesha on 10/28/10
It is now 10 years on from when to wrote your 5 part story. They were great but I wish you had of finished the whole story.

Comment by Alison Mary on 08/01/09
Come on ,darling,finish the story for us before I fall off the perch.
The suspense is elevating my blood pressure and not helping.Love and best wishes----may God bless you.

Comment by cathy angela d on 08/02/08
I really liked your story when is it going to be finished.

Comment by ANNOUMOUS on 08/02/08
WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO FINISH YOUR STORY?

Comment by cad on 08/02/08
good start

Comment by whr on 03/09/08
are you going to add any more to this story

Comment by J-Lynn on 11/14/07
This is a sweet story without the forced, bondage issues that can insult the reader. Please continue your story about Bobbie, her Sister, Mother, and Aunt. Also the story line had a girl from Bobbie's school know her and was to check on Sunday about coming over. You should "run" with that also as Janet may help Bobbie further into girl and womanhood. Janice Lynn Miller

Comment by Rosemary Langton on 09/15/07
I loved your stories it so wonderful to read somehting where the heroin lovs what is being done to her and there is no bondage or beatings please continue

Comment by Mandee on 06/09/05
Hi Debra
  I am enjoying the tale of Bobbie and Catriona and their Aunt and Mom.  Of course it is wish fulfillment at it's zenith:  to be treated as a young lady by the important females in your life.  How we all wished for that but never had it.  Thank you for bringing it to life for us- even vicariously.
Hugs
Mandee

Comment by juliej on 05/25/04
what a good story look foreword to the next parts this story is great i was amazed that bobs mother went through with it it say something that understands the way bob is with his sexuality great work next part please

Comment by Michelle ET Chamberlain on 12/03/02

At long last I've got round to read your lovely & interesting story: Caught.. and at the bottom it says to be continued?

I would like to know if there is any more chapters forth coming cos I really would love to know what happens next.. whether or not Bobbi goes to lives with her Aunt, goes to school as a girl and transforms to a beautiful & excellent girl.

Just to let you know that I am a Transsexual and going through the changes myself with out the support of family, so these stories do keep me going, so Do keep it up Debra

Love,

Michelle xxx

Comment by Barbara Lynn on 11/17/02
This is definitely a story of caring love. The way it goes now is the way TG fiction should be written. It needs to be continued as it is not finished yet. However, please don't incorporate any forced servitude or french maid outfits, as it would spoil what you have already written. But, you do need to continue the adventures of Bobbie; at school, with friends (new or old). How about having him meet a girl on the cheerleading squad who has him try out for it. Of course she will know his secret. But since you have started out with care and understanding, it should remain within that theme.

Barb

Comment by Christinea on 12/14/01
I loved your story and I do wish that you finish it soon. This story is written very good and that is missing from most stories of this type. I wish I was Bobbie in this story,  you see I am  crossdresser and it takes a lot for me to pass as a female, However if I would have started earlier in life I would look much better and take less make-up LoL. No spam mail please only real responses and possible more!!Thank you bye.

Comment by sarah on 07/09/01
I would just like to say that i think you should continue the story about bobbie it is a great story and i would like to hear how it ends.

Keep up the good work,

Sarah

Comment by Long time on 06/20/01
Well, it seems you will not be continuing this story. To bad. The skill of the writing has grown and the complete story would have been great.

Comment by Diane Sutton on 05/05/01
Nice story and I think you have a lot more to tell with it. I would like you to continue with it if you're still writing. Yes, there may be some grammar mistakes as we all do, but your story is one that many of us readers would like to have happened to us when we were young. Please take the time and effort to continue with the story. Most people will not even send an email to say they enjoy a story. Don't let that stop you. And we do need more stories from someone accross the pond.

Comment by Mary Anne on 02/27/01
I really loved this story. I thought it was very cute. I hope you continue the saga about Bobbie. I know a few people who have gone through the changes almost like Bobbie, but without all the money available. Keep up the splended work.



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