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Caught Between
by Laurie S.

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Comment by Silvia.     (from Brazil) on 07/17/09
Why Linda believed in Studlater? She didn't deserve this.
But you wrote a good and amazing story, and I really loved your story.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Now on 07/11/04
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Comment by jill m i on 09/02/03
Your story took me back a few years and then quite a few years. I enjoyed your first version and enjoyed the original Hold'em Caufield in the 60's.

Your writing has improved. Keep at it.

Jill

Comment by Marlene B. on 09/02/03
Superb writing!  It's rare to find an author on this site who makes you want to read every line, and not just skip to the "good parts".  It must have been a lot of work, but it's worth it!



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