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Caught
by Lorraine Simmons

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Comment by Johnny on 01/09/14
I really enjoyed your story "Caught".  It was written very well, and I could almost feel myself being this poor snook who is caught by his wife!
Comment by Ronda Kay Berry on 07/02/10
loved it!!
Comment by Silvia  (from Brazil) on 09/20/09
I'm sorry, but I don't like your story, she isn't a good woman, if she dislike his crossdressing, divorce is the better choice for both.
I'm sorry, but this is what I think!
Silvia.
Comment by MrsCringe on 05/02/06
This is one of my favorite stories. Very erotic and detailed. Please continue Lorraine's adventures with part 2 asap!
Comment by julie j on 09/02/04
the story as it is very welll written you have a good writing skill i would like a part 2 in this story to read how much father his wife will go it would make an intresting conclusion&sequel
Comment by Tiffany Anne Easton on 07/03/04
I remember reading this story several years ago. (I think it was on the Nifty archives). I loved it then and still do. To me it's a classic! It's sexy and erotic. It has just the right amount of suspense and a nice little twist. And then it really gets good.

Great descriptive narrative on his dressing in the various outfits. A very "stimulating" story. Thanks for posting it here, Lorraine!
Comment by SassySue on 07/03/04
Nice story, I just don't know if he desrves what his wife has in store for him.

The story would have been even more enjoyable without run-on paragraphs and better use of quotations.  Perhaps Lorraine could use the services of one of the volunteer editors listed on theauthors help page.

But please do continue writting.  Your do paint interesting word pictures.

SS
Comment by Jane Hudson on 07/03/04
Unhappy pah he/she loves it great story


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