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Caught In The Act
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Comment by thewallis on 09/03/19
Did Susan Fiona Jane Mrs Reid and Mrs Taylor seem so smug and laugh as much after the acid attack? Comment by check this out on 11/20/13 BCjNIT I think this is a real great article.Much thanks again. Awesome. Comment by juliej on 05/05/08 as per my previous comments Comment by juliej on 07/30/04 another great story again punishment to fit the crime elaberated the punishment part how i love those tight marron panties well done again Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 10/30/03 In this rare case, I disagree with Pervy. I found this story, particularly for 1950's Britain, quite realistic. There are things David could have done to mitigate his crime: He could have shouted around to see if the owner of the mac was near and would lend it. Failing that, he could have left a note in the bike saddlebag with his name and address. As to the punishment, I thought it fit the crime and did not get out of hand. Both mothers were involved and it was clear that while the experience was meant to be humiliating, it was also meant to teach a lesson. By explaining the situation to everyone, it was temporarily humiliating, but it also let everyone know David was not voluntarily dressing as a girl. The girls were not overly cruel or sadistic, and this was helped by the fact that David took his punishment well and didn't whine and cry about it. Finally, it worked! Comment by Priscilla on 10/01/03 Jennifer, Comment by Pervette on 10/01/03 The girls' reaction is grossly out of proportion to the supposed Comment by Jan_Wytte on 07/11/03 Dear Jennifer: Comment by Lynette Francis on 07/10/03 Nice story, good plot. Comment by Lynette Francis on 07/10/03 Nice story, good plot. |
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