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Caught in the Net
by Anyport

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Comment by julieh on 12/31/12
great star to a story more please
Comment by Hema on 07/09/12
I'm only 12, but I plan on getting a belly btuton piercing when I'm at least 15 or 16. My mom approves and since I already have two piercings on each ear and I'm getting my bellybutton pierced I think that'll be it for piercings!
Comment by ashley on 04/26/12
Well now what a great job on this one . I have some more fantasy material to think about. Yummy
Comment by Silvia. on 10/12/10
Forced feminization?
I can't believe it! Very bad story!
Comment by juliej on 01/05/09
good start to this story it can be carried on more please
Comment by Mistress Meredith on 12/16/08
I made my maid, Priscilla Ann -- formerly my idiot husband -- reveal every story she has ever read on Ms. Crystal's website. I thorough;ly enjoyed this one. Mistress Angela certainly has some interesting plans in store for Tina, including her now toiling as Mistress Angela's maid, but under the direction of her former "cleaning lady" (A lovely, delicious piece of irony). In addition, it appears Tina will suffer dearly should she ever disobey either Lady. Well done by Mistress Angela.
Comment by Priscilla Ann on 02/16/08
Marvelous forced feminization of Trevor/Tina. Mistress is certainly very stern and quite menacing. It would be interesting to see what happens when Tina's "cleaning lady" has her way with Tina; or better yet, when she and Mistress team up to use and abuse poor Tina. Though it has been while since you wrote this; more would be wonderful
Comment by julie j on 03/24/05
a VERY GOOD STORY BUT TREVOR DID NOT ANTISIPACATE WHAT WOULD HAPEN HOOK LINE &SINKER HE FELL INTO HER TRAP  I WOULD LIKE TO READ MORE OF THIS STORY SO PLEASE WRITE A FURTHER PART IT WAS GREAT WHAT A WAY TO GO
Comment by hope on 03/07/05
That was a very nce story. Thank you for writing it. I was wondering if there was going to be a follow up?
Comment by Noel Lexicon on 12/04/00
Good Job!

That strange sound may have been me panting.

My only complaint - the story ended too abruptly. I guess I wanted more of her taking away of his freedom, of bending him to her will. In smaller and lots more numerous steps. Typical reader! Liked it and wanted more!


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