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The Celestial Placement Agency
by Valentina Michelle Smith

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Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 10/07/07
TINA, MUCH AS I HATE THE HUMILIATION AND DESTRUCTION OF A WOMAN'S INNOCENCE, I VERY MUCH APPLAUD THE JUST DESSERTS VISITED UPON THIS EXTREMIST. TO REALLY MAKE HIM PAY, LET HIM GET PREGNANT SEVERAL TIMES, GIVING BIRTH TO ONLY WOMEN OR TRANS-GENDERED BOYS. THAT WOULD MAKE HIS LIFE TRULY HELL. THANK YOU TINA FOR A WONDERFUL LOOK AT HEAVEN AND HELL.
Comment by Alice Digsit on 04/24/07
I've had a similar fantasy for a while, only I've wondered whether forced feminisation wouldn't be the perfect punishment in *this* life for Muslim extremists, and perhaps for the Christian ones too, since their views aren't a milion miles away from each other.

I liked the feel of the story too, the gentle pace, the sense of ennui and inevitability.

Nice story.

Comment by Rob Willson on 11/29/05
Having had our own home grown suicide bombers in London, I like this story.  

I think it is even better than the version which has Osama bin Laden getting beaten up by 72 Virginians before being thrown out of paradise.

HE got it wrong too!
Comment by adam on 11/23/05
I like this story.
I find it interesting that hell and heaven can be the same place for 2 diffrent people.
Comment by Dave H on 11/22/05
Great story.  It's nice to see an author who isn't afraid to center a story around "the forbidden subject."  Maybe there's hope for us, after all.
Comment by Jillian on 11/20/05
A philly girl writing about the El. Must have had terrible rides. I enjoyed the story. Please make a part two and send  some more unwholesome people to see Jerry. Do the initials WJC a very prominent person or H nee Rodam C.
Comment by Paula Jutras on 11/20/05
great story. Would  be nice to have a part 2 to see how life in the harem is.
Comment by Eleanor on 11/20/05
Now THAT was a great story, one of the kinds of stories that keep me going to Storysite in the first place.Thank you for writing it.
Comment by Another Brian on 11/19/05
Hey, a great short story.Probably very close to the truth.
It is a really enjoyable read. Designed to make you think.


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