Way to go girls. Nice revenge story.

mistress merideth intresting name not bad story could be a lot better

Perfectly suited revenge on a macho moron. cerise got what she she had coming to her and the Ladies got to enjoy themselves at her expense and share in oodles of money. WELL DONE!

Stunningly well planned revenge. Poor Cerise got just what he/she deserved and then some. Ah, sweet revenge!

great story more please

Hi Hon   I liked it because, other than the quick transformation, the situations could be imagined to be real.  Oh, you know, those pimps really know how to stick it to their girls, always prodding them to a greater effort.  And that's not even mentioning the freebies that they expected from the girls.  I wish the story wasn't so short.

Luv    Rachel Rae

Loved it.  Revenge is always sweet.  You could continue this tale, and I would love to see that, like to read about his first pierced tongue BJ, but it sounds like you are done with this story, but I sure hope not, and I do like all of your stories..great job.  XO Pammy

I liked the fact that you didn't take the road most traveled and have him like or get aroused by the anal sex.  I imagine that they will never let Robert come back, as they will want to avoid his desire for revenge.  Since Robert seems pretty gullible, my scenario would be that they keep him working past payback till they have enough for "her" SRS.  Then another party to celebrate his release, he has another blackout, and she wakes up Cerise for life.