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Chain Reaction
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Chelsea on 01/14/08
I think I'm starting to see a pattern here. This person did nothing to merit this whole transformation, there is no apparent reason. Miss Jennifer White seems to really hate men, why I'm not really sure. Though her sexism gets on my nerves, you should meet my friend Julie, her place looked EXACTLY like that guys xD And yes she was born a genetic girl.
Comment by Mae on 07/02/05
Either it was a typo that Megan was "the least pretty of the three sisters", or the magic not only silently turned one of the other brothers into a girl as well, but also removed the last brother? Otherwise it was a nice story, although I believe the guitar could have survived or become an acoustic one.
Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 06/06/05
Who:  Blake/Megan
What:  feminine transformation of Blake and his apartment
Where:  Blakes totally masculine bachelor pad
When:  Blakes Birthday
How:  Magic furnished by Aunt Millie and/or her gift

All of the above was written very very well, especially the transformation of the apartment, but it was all for naught because...

... No answer to WHY?  Arrrrggghh !!!  Sooooo frustrating.

Why did Aunt Millie do this to her nephew?  Very


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