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Chameleon's Birth
by Triss Morgan

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Comment by paul on 10/07/08
What a fantastic story please write soon. I would like to see more stories from the chameleon. Thanks for the story so far.  :)
Comment by poe on 10/04/05
More i want more now please.This is a great story please continue it soon!
Comment by Jess Arita on 11/20/04
I liked the story a lot, except that Chameleon seemed too all-powerful.  There was a comic book called "Normalman" that was a takeoff of superhero comics.  It had a Superman-type character who had "the ability to develop a new superpower in response to every plot twist".  Chameleon seemed that way to me.

Comment by vladdraquulia on 11/16/04
Fantastic story please keep it going don't stop now!! End? Ha never
Crystal don't you dare let her stop writing. Tris keep up the good work and Chameleon, Keep fighting the good fight

vladd
Comment by Pippa K. on 11/16/04
"The End for now?"  God!  I hope not!  You wrote a nice story that leaves us wanting more.  C'mon, one little more chapter?  Please?  Pretty please?  You simply must describe at least one love scene between Laura and Cally!
Comment by Tina Michelle Smith on 11/16/04
Triss writes with a rare passion, weaving an action-packed tale of a victim who refuses to be victimized.  We need more stories like this.
Excellent work, Triss.  I look forward to more adventures of Chameleon.


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