KhmSwh Looking forward to reading more. Great article.Really thank you! Keep writing.

I enjoyed this story. I even cried at parts. Laughed at others. The ending was wonderful. Thanks for your efforts.

I thank you humbly for shairng your wisdom JJWY

i enjoyed the story until the last two sections. the plots twists were fun and the characters, especpecially Anne and young Mandi, were sympathetic. but there was no need to development a new domination theme, it did not fit with the rest of the story and was out oif sync, jarring.

a very long story with wicked twists in it all the way excellent the story was well described &written never boring bring you up to where you think the end would be and dragging you halfway or all the way to the ground brilliant if your other stories are like this then iwould be very happy and i also hope that you will write more as well, thankyou for a brilliant story very exciting from start to finish more please

Love this story just great

THIS IS A GOOD STORY. THERE ARE A FEW PLACES WHERE IT MIGHT NEED SOME CLEANING UP, SUCH AS HOW IS IT THAT, AFTER THE ACCIDENT, THE E. M. T. COULD NOT TELL THAT HE WAS EXAMINING A MAN AND NOT A WOMAN?
ASIDE FROM THAT I WAS VERY INTERESTED AND WOULD LIKE TO SEE MORE FROM THIS AUTHOR.

Dear, this is one of the most wonderful stories I have read. You really did a masterful job of weaving many, many complex situations into a thoroughly delightful story. The plot, the character development, the entire story line were perfection to the nth degree. I could really feel John and Helene come alive. You really dealt well with hypocricy both on the societal and religious end. Kudos!

well what can i say the whole story was imensley good the writing the turn of the trables at the end and how it all fitted together and in the end everyone was happy well done more stories on this subject but also a few with enforced feminninty in them and some about petticoat punishment excellent

Hi Amelia. This is a very good story. I liked it immensely. I do hope that you write more on this same theme. Domination gone wrong. I will be looking forward to your next story, if you write one.

Barb

I agree this is a potential classic.  I think that Helene would have been happy to continue in the maid's role, and proof of that was the willingness to serve as Kay's secretary.  Somehow, I think the story could have ended there.  Still, the "turnabout" at the end for Kay was ingenious.  Amelia has much to be proud of here.

I love a happy ending, although I thought it a bit rushed.  I liked Kay having to be the maid for awhile.  I think, though, that there was a touch of enjoyment for Helene in being the maid; why not include Mandi and rotate being the maid so it would be a fun thing for all three?  
I also thought that it would have been more believable with a complete sex change - How could he BE Helene with the constant reminder of "his" maleness hanging between his legs?  Also, what about the possibility of accident?  It would have to be very extreme for the doctors or whoever to take "her" fingerprints, but all they'd have to do is undress "him".
How about a sequel where we find out what happened to the Doctor's daughter?

Absolutely, positively the best and most complex, surprising story I've read on this site. I love femdom and office stories, but this is that and more.  The author here has taken this thing so many different directions but never sacrificed one iota of pacing.  The characterizations have depth and substance; the story is believable and the underlying social commentary on religious hypocrites, arrogant lawyers, etc. are deftly handled. If this author does this as a hobby, I'd be preparing stuff for literary agents.  It's the best of 2002.