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That's "sordid", not "sorted".

That was such a beautiful story.It is wonerful when a mother helps
her son become a girl.

I enjoyed your story very much and it was great that Debbie's desires were fulfilled.

YOUR STORY MADE ME CRY, I WISH THAT HAPPENED TO ME.

this is an interesting story of a boy whom widhed he was a girl it was most enjoyable well thought outand could be continued

Firstly, I want to agree with Colleen that this is TG Fiction 101. Having said that, however, the story is well written. The plot moves along at a good pace and the story is most enjoyable. I enjoyed this story for what it is and also for the promise you show as an authoress.

I found everything about the story to be pretty basic - TG fiction 101.  There was really nothing in it that hasn't been done 100 times before.

Having said that, I will add that if this is your first effort, you should keep at it.  Don't let my criticism discourage you.  Rather work at improving your writing.

Kisses.

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A sweet tale, nicely told. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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--Pervy

an interesting story with a happy ending.  i wish that it worked out like that in life.  seemed a little unrealistically easy, but good all the same.  keep it up.