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A Change in Our Marriage
by Sara Girl

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Comment by dave on 04/13/16
This story, start to finish, was one of the most erotic things I have ever read. A lover telling her partner that she wants him to be more feminine, and the way she did it with percentages, is responsible for my being a sissy househusband in skirts and heels!!! THANK YOU -- MORE STORIES PLEASE

Comment by crorkz on 08/04/14
FYV0Qz I really like and appreciate your article post.Really thank you! Much obliged.

Comment by don king on 04/07/14
I read these stories because my wife cheated on me for years. I have found many simularities how she tried doing alot of things to me. I read these to learn just how manipulative women are and so I can recognize thee signs early. I gave her the option get out now or we swing. If she gets others then so do I. We swung 4 time but the cheater couldn't handle sharing her husband. Before I could ddevorce her she overdosed. Single life sucks. I don't understand how the woman in these stories can say they love anyone as obviously they only care about themselves. The abusive woman in your story deserves to be Single. At the end in the minivan I was hoping he would say he was leaving her I stead that he was testing her faithfulness and she lost.

Comment by lana on 08/30/13
very well written crafted story, a very manipulative lady indeed

Comment by thisisme on 06/06/13
Reread it... She was a bit of a chickenshit. She conditioned him with her lies. Those lies weakened him for her final assault to get him to give in.

Comment by Texashunger on 04/15/13
what a really beautiful story of love...  hunger....  enjoyment....
control.....

I found myself reading it again and again.... and ..... making so many messes.


Comment by this is me on 07/27/12
There is not a lot you can protest on his behalf. Not once did she intimidate him. Not once did she threaten him. Apparently she didn't take pictures to blackmail him. excuse me, there are two things you could protest. She obviously lied to him and she gave that sleaze their home phone number.

Comment by april on 01/21/12
sorry, should have added :this was a very well crafted story.

Comment by April on 01/20/12
I felt this was a story about a couple where the man was impotent and they had worked out a loving solution that within there relationship he was prepared to allow her sex outwith there marriage as he cared for her. She in turn allowed him a female role play outlet to compensate for the loss of sex between them.

to be impotent is a terrible sterile thing for a relationship but I felt the solution led into a very cruel and exploitive situation .


Comment by fanfan on 11/13/10
one of the best stories i ever read. why not writing more of
those wonderfull games.
i love it  

Comment by Penny on 10/30/10
I really liked the story. How things happened at a nice pace and the way the wife subdued her hushand was incredibly well written. Please write more.

Comment by Abby on 09/27/10
I found this story extremly believable. She went along with the
fanatisizing until she was in complete controland all of the time she made it his desire. Well done.

Comment by Donnie on 09/22/10
WOW!!!

Comment by Sandra on 08/13/10
I can tell by your writing that this is something that has been experenced and not completely fiction. I loved reading your stories and hope you will write more. Your stories really hit home and by far are the best that I have read.

Comment by Debbie on 11/02/09
I just reread all the chapters and I loved them as much as the first time. I hope you will continue the stories soon. I have had similar experences in my marriage and I can't wait to read more.

Comment by jack on 01/01/09
This was possibly the best story i ever read. The way sara controlled john/julie was fantastic (and my fantasy). I loved the dress up, feminazation and humiliation but combined with the way sara persuaded was the best.

I hope sara evenually persuades julie to share a real man with her - one who doesnt know he's a man.

Thanks Sara - keep writing please!


Comment by Yoron on 06/02/08
Kind of sick.
That's no normal love.
To me it seems about humiliation and abuse.
Like a feverish nightmare.

Where would love and care be in this story?
And faith and trust??

Nah.

Yoron


Comment by Andy on 12/26/07
it is really a great story ... it is also could made any man love the cuckold life ...
Great.

Comment by Don on 12/03/07
This was the most erotic story I have ever read, bar none.  Was any/all? of it real?

Comment by Whoremonica on 08/31/07
I was spellbound by this story!  You managed to capture the dichotomy of sara's compulsion, the continual "push-pull" is painful and exciting throughout the story.  I had genuine tears in my eyes and wet panties at the same time!  Sara's mate is a deliciously evil genius!  It left me feeling a sense of loss.  Not so much for Sara, but for myself, because I wanted to keep reading and the damn story was over!  Thanks so much.

Comment by Jo on 08/31/07
A wonderful story, Please continue.

Comment by Bobbie on 07/30/07
I'd love it if my wife controlled me this way.

Comment by billy jd on 07/25/07
I read your story(all 4 parts). I found it very exciting but also sad. I was in an abusive relationship a few years ago and this story hit close to home. I have mixed feelings about it, and while the story was excellent it made me wonder how men who really live this life can deal with it. I know I was devastated when I was made aware of my lady's cheating  on me. I also wonder how it feels to be the other guy. Maybe you can give some insight on this in the next installment.

Comment by Ginny on 06/15/07
Great Story, I love the dialog between sissy and his Wife.  These are the parts of a cuckold/femdom/sissy marriage that people do not see.  They only notice the sex parts and it is WAY more than that.  Excellent work.  Please continue to explore the depths of their relationship.

Comment by Bobbie on 04/11/07
Great escalation in both psychological capture (wife's growing domination) and husband's submission.  Now (after part 4) that Julie is aware of her role and excitement with fresh cream pies, I can see this evolving to the point where Sara has Julie participate in preparing Sara's studs with oral foreplay.  Perhaps Julie will eventually progress to the point where she can prepare two lovers for her dear Sara and then be obedient enough to sit and fondle 'herself' to orgasm as she watches two real men service Sara.  Of course, Julie will need to lick her small puddle of mess from her own hand before she can provide cleanup services to Sara's well engorged creampie.  The tie down restraints certainly add a bit of excitement as Julie can continue the quandry of whether she is fully accepting or really being forced... and Sara can further evolve in her gentle domination by delivering the creamy delights to her anxious and waiting subject.  Thanks for your creativity!  I'll now have to see how far we can progress along this same delightful path.

Comment by Lyssa on 03/09/07
Wonderful story! Could I suggest another chapter wherein Sara and Julie are married again. Julie in white and further affirming her status buy vowing to love, honor and obey Sara. It could take them through a honeymoon cruise where both of their fantasies are fulfilled again and again.

Comment by Jamie on 05/15/06
Dear Sara,
I have just read all four parts of your story and find it completely breathtaking. The way she slowly uses his fantasy to get what she wants is mind blowing and exhilarating. Even many days after reading the story i am continually thinking about what happened and more excitedly what will happen next. Please write more and continue the adventure further. Thankyou for such an enjoyable tale.

Comment by Sandie on 03/26/06
I've read all four parts and i love the way the story develops. Sara gradually ratchets up her dominance over her sissy cuckold hubby. I adore women like Sara, and I wish i was HER sissy.

Great series. I hope there is more to come.

Sandie

Comment by suna on 02/17/06
It is an excellently written story, but make no mistake as to what type of story.

one comment was -- 'a crossdressers fantasy' -- like hell it is..

this is a horror story played out in slow motion. the man here is being killed for her fantasy, i would suggest she picked him when she saw the date he had - i'd even bet she was in the room at the time


Comment by Jennifer on 12/07/05
Darling: I love your stories Please, Please Continue.

Comment by debbie on 08/16/05
I think this story is every crossdressers fantasy, it is certainly mine, your story is written in such a way, it is as if i was being transformed by sara. I can't wait for a new installment.

Comment by Sissy Susan on 03/24/05
From start to finish,this is every Sissy-Husbands dream scenario.I hope you keep the stories coming as fast as I've been cumming:)

Comment by Pete Zee on 02/08/05
Sara - this is a beautiful story - I love the way that Sara always gets her cuckold lover to agree to every step that she takes - my afvourite bit is the part with the purse and the condoms - secretly he loves that she will be coming home with a creampie.  Hope you like my stories too!

Comment by Sheryl S. on 02/03/05
Riveting -- you made every word count.  I'd love to read even more adventures with the characters.  Lovely development.

Comment by Brooke on 02/01/05
Wonderful !!!!!!!!!!!   moreeeeeee

Comment by    Brenda on 01/12/05
Your story has left me totally breathless. If only?

Comment by Pretty on 12/21/04
Great story, loved all three chapters,i can't wait for chapter four.

Comment by Pauline on 11/17/04
Just delicious.  please continue.  The fantasy is so achievable.  Wish I could find a lady like that

Comment by Sheepish_eyes on 11/17/04
Awesome. Very nice story. They way a husband should be.
I wanked over this story.

Comment by samantha21 on 11/16/04
this story is  great and very good,.camnnot wait for next part

Comment by Sheryl S. on 11/05/04
How positively liscious!!!  Just loved every word, that's all.  Very internally consistent.  Very understandable, human, and humane.  You do an excellent way of depicting how difficult and serpentine it is so often en route to uncovering each of our own true feelings.  It is a step-by-step unlocking of Pandora's Box, and oh-so-sensual!!!

This is a true keeper!

Kisses and Hugs,
Sheryl S.

Comment by christina on 10/31/04
where did you come from? this is excellent material please I beg you to continue - very much like my favourite story writer Vicky Stern.  Keeping with the sense of reality in a sensous, loving and sutle manner in the provcation and degradtion of the male in the relationship. his psychological exceptance of his inner self...Mmmmmmmmm  

Comment by Michelle on 10/31/04
Dear Sara,
I loved the story so far.  It is so sweet and gentle, the way she is transforming him.  Not like some of those stories that are so harsh.  Please find the time to post the next chapter and keep up the good writing.  I hope to see more of your work.
Hugs
Michelle

Comment by louisa on 10/30/04
I loved the story.  It made plain most of my fantasies and I can't wait for part two.

Comment by Darla Benton on 10/29/04
Very nice story with several intimate interludes in various scenarios.  Just my type of theme and story line.  Ending leads to a variety of possibilities.  I am looking forward to your second installment.

Darlagirl

Comment by Tim on 10/29/04
I loved your story, and hope Part 2 is posted soon!

Comment by Sally Stephanie on 10/29/04
What a wonderful story! I hope you continue it.

Comment by Robbie on 10/29/04
nice plot development!

I loved it...

please let me know when you add part 2.

Comment by Missy on 10/28/04
I loved this story. I hope you add Part 2 soon

Comment by Debi on 10/27/04
How many times have you printed this story?  I think I seen it at least twice before.



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