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A Change in Time
by Karen Anne Summerfield

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Comment by Pepita on 10/26/12
these are BEAUTIFUL!!  i wish we lived closer so that you could take pciutres of caleb.  we've never had professionals done of him before (i know, we're bad parents) but your stuff is fantastic!

Comment by Zryan on 10/23/12
Meg!  I love the last one with all three kids; mostly bsacuee of composition.  It looks like they are in three different compartments.. or different WORLDS for that matter.  you can really see each marked personality.  The photo looks  designed  as I like to call it which is what I say when you can tell something has been thought out as opposed to amateur work.  Nice job!Jake.

Comment by Maid Joy on 08/31/08
Mmmmmmm....  I loved this.  I'd love to see more, to find out what happened.

Comment by spacecase sweety on 06/13/08
I really liked this story,
I really want to find out what is going on...
the next chapter would be very nice to read,
but it looks like it was written quite a while ago,
so I guess that it is unlikely that a 3rd part will show up...

great story,
worth reading.


Comment by Stacey on 09/29/05
Intriguing plot outline, with many questions left unanswered and lots of directions for things to go.  Deserves to be completed, though it might take novel-length to tie up all the loose ends.

Comment by Cynthia on 02/19/05
   WOW! Great story , cant wait to read more!!

Comment by Jim on 01/29/05
i think it was u i was chatting with tonight, Jim
Victor

                        by Sean Obyrne

     My name is John and I am the new kid in town, as Dad was transferred again
and I had no choice in the matter. It was the forth move in my short 14 years. It was
the first day in school and after going through the lunch line, I was looking for a
place to sit. I spotted a table with only one boy sitting at it. He was a nice looking
boy with blond hair and was a little chubby and he looked lonely.
     “Hi. Do you mind if I sit here”? “Please do” he said with a smile.
     I reached out and shook his hand. “I’m John and I’m new in town” I said.
     I was surprised at how soft his hand was and how weak his grip. I kept trying
to make conversation as I ate. When I told him where I lived, he really brightened
up and told me he lived two doors down from me. He then warned me that the other
kids in school, might give me a hard time if I was nice to the fat boy. He looked so
sad when he said it, that I decided we were gonna be real good friends. We sat
together at lunch the rest of the week and Friday he invited me over to hang out,
after school. He told me that he lived with just he mother as his Dad had been killed
in the last war.
     I knocked on his door and his Mom let me in. She was chubby also but very
nice looking. She told me to go up to Vic’s room as he was probably on his
computer. Vic had told me that his mom had a heart condition and never went
upstairs. I walked up the stairs and went into Vic’s room. He was sitting at his
computer and hastily dumped out of what he was looking at as I entered the room.
“You are early.” he said.
     “Hi Vic”, I said as I entered the room. “What are you looking at”?
     “Hi, just junk” he said, as he looked at me sheepishly. I noticed that he was a
little turned on, from the budge in his pants, that he was trying to hide. “Nice room
dude.” I said as I looked around and gave him time to cool off. “That’s a nice
computer, how long have you had it?” We chatted a little and he told me he was
hooked up to the internet by cable. “Why don’t you get us some cokes and then you
can show me some of your favorite sites?”
     He bounded out of the room and as soon as he was gone I went over and
clicked on his bookmarks. Wow, yes there they were, Fictionmania, Crystals story
site, Best of Nifty, Panty Lovers International, Sissy Land, Mrs-Silk plus many
more. Yes, this is what I had hoped for, now I knew he was a sissy. Soon he would
be my sissy. I went back to the home page and waited for him to come back.
     “Mom sent up some sandwiches too,” he said as he walked in carrying a tray.
A big smile on his face. He sure is a cutie, I thought to myself as I accepted the
sandwich and coke. We chilled and ate our snack and just had a nice time talking.
      “Now show me some of the sites you like to visit.” He sat in front of the
computer and I stood directly behind him, with my hands on his shoulders, as he
brought up some mild porn sites. “Wow, I never get to see any of these as my Dad
blocked a lot of this stuff, show me more.” I was lying about them being blocked on
my computer, but I wanted him to show my what he really liked. I gently massaged
his shoulders and I could feel my dick getting hard, standing so close to him, I knew
he was aware of my hard on as I poked him a few times.
     Now, really show me some of the sites you like to spend time at hon. He
made no attempt to move away from me and he went to Fictionmania. Then he
leaned back against my body and raised his head to look back at me. I smiled at him
and then leaned down and kissed his soft lips. The kiss lasted maybe a minute and
then he moved back to the computer. I continued to stand behind him and I reached
down and unbuttoned his shirt. He made no attempt to stop me and then I reached
down and cupped his chubby little titties. They were quite large and felt so soft and
nice. Gently pinching his hard nipples. I continued to fondle him as I bent down and
whispered in his ear. “Do you want me to stop hon?”
He hesitated for a second and then whispered –“NO.”
     I kissed his ear and whispered into it. “Trade places with me honey”. He
stood up slowly and I sat in the chair and then slowly finished unbuttoning his shirt
and slipped it off him. His titties were so lovely to look at and his nipples were so
hard. I continued to fondle them as I looked at him, “You need to wear a bra hon.”
He looked so embarrassed and yet was so excited.
      I pulled him close and gently sucked on his hard nipple as I slipped my hand
into his pants and gently squeezed his hard little penis. His moans were getting
louder and louder so I covered his lips with mine as I opened his pants and let them
fall to the floor. He was standing there, wearing just his tight white jockies and they
were so tented. I slowly traced his hard little penis with my fingers and It was
jumping around in his undies. Again I asked him if he wanted me to stop, and again
he said no. Taking the waist band in my hands I slowly slipped his little cotton
undies down, and his little penis jumped out at me. It was less than four inches long,
circumcised and not very thick, and was completely hairless.
     I reached out and pulled him to me and kissed his little penis and then
cupping his chubby behind, I pulled him closer to me hugged him close and kissed
him again. I led him over to the bed and he lay on his belly with his with his cute ass
sticking up in the air. Sitting next to him.
“Maybe we should slow down a little and think about this hon.” I said as I gently
started massaging his soft body.
He just moaned and let me do what I wanted.
     His chubby body was so appealing I just had to touch it. Tell me about
yourself honey I said as I slowly explored his body with my hands.
     He told me about how miserable he had been to grow up without a father and
how the kids had teased him because he was so chubby. My hands wandered over
his body as he talked and I found my hands exploring his chubby behind. His skin
was so soft and his behind was so cute. My fingers slipped into the crack and he
spread his legs farther apart. I found his little pucker and slowly pushed my finger
into him. He moaned and push back at my finger and It sank deep into him. I bent
down and started nursing on his cute tittie as I move my finger in and out. I was
about to insert a second finger, when I heard his mother calling him. He jumped up
and started dressing. I went to see what she wanted and she told me dinner we ready
and I was invited to stay and eat. She also suggested that I sleep over as their was
no school tomorrow. I called mom and she readily gave her consent.



Anybody that would like to rewrite this story of just copy the idea, please do so with
my blessing.

Sean

comments please flaguy622002@yahoo.com

Comment by "Princess Pervette" on 12/01/01
It's a great story, but I'm not sure how much I'll be able to
take.  It's too much like my childhood: telling the truth and
not being believed, being hounded by a chimerical "reputation"
you can't shake, abuse of various kinds.  Not your fault, but
there it is....

Pervy

Comment by Susan on 12/01/01
Very nice story, looking forward to the next part.
I already know about what I am going to dream tonight...that is for sure...
greetings, Susan

Comment by Marina12 on 11/30/01
So far so good.  Its a fun story that keeps me wanting to find out more.



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