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Change of Heart
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Thelma on 11/25/03
I have to agree with Jezzi it must of been hell and Satana. All poor Tom wanted to do was say thank you to the family who's daughters heart he had received.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 11/25/03
Wow, what a wonderful story for Jolene and what a horror story for Tom.  Did Lisa actually go to heaven, or to hell?  Did she meet God or Satan(a)?   My vote goes for Satana.  Lisa gets her life back, but what about Tom, trapped inside.  Even if he "liked being pretty", it would be like being a pretty quadrapelegic.  If Lisa had to come back because she had good work left to do, a merciful God or goddess would have taken Tom to herself, not leave him trapped like that.



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