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A Change of Life
by Paula Mortenson

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Comment by WilmaR on 01/13/04
I liked the stories. I wished you had endowed Paula with at least a little of her grandfather's deflationary wit to use on her father in Part 3. I would also like to have had Mel and Sandy both become pregnant before the story ended--preferably far enough along to find that both were going to have twins!

Hugs,

Wilma

Comment by cassandra on 10/11/03
Paula dear,

This was beautifully, beautifully written. The tale is so compelling and lovely. I hope there will be a sequel, but the choice is yours.

Thank you so very much for a well written and thoughtful story.

Cassandra

Comment by Sheryl S. on 10/05/03
Beautifully realized erotica -- I found it quite compelling and satisying and look forward to the next chapter.

Love and Huggs,
Sheryl S.



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