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by Prudence Walker

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Comment by Silvia. on 03/03/12
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Comment by Herenya on 12/25/07
Just great, I really love the shapeshifter´s stories, and this is really cool, please keep the good work, I´m a fan of you. Is so great see how this universe is growing.

Comment by Gianna Michelle on 06/19/07
Great story once again wish we could drop bombs full of what was in the box that transformed. The bad guys in the locked room on terrorist training camps and such lol. Can you just imagine bin laden as a woman would be so funny either that or a very little girl. Considering what they think of women it would be a fitting punishment

Comment by a guy on 06/16/07
a fun comic book style romp, with the heroes shapechanging themselves and others at the drop of a hat and solving superscience problems weekly.  

it all feels a bit like a spoof, with plot logic holes ignored - who did set the bombs? who robbed them? what about the the other corp? and how were they tracked? were among a few of the questions never answered.

still, it was a fun read.




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