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Change to Live
by Maddy Bell

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Comment by suba suba on 11/07/19

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Comment by Laquisha on 12/13/11

I can't believe I've been going for years without kinonwg that.

Comment by Silvia (from Brazil) on 09/27/09

Hi Maddy!
As always you wrote a great and amazing story.
But was Sarah who caused all the troubles that she and Mak has sufered. She complained he did not do anything against the thefts in the streets.
But as always you're great writer, and I love you for this!
Write more always!
A lot of kisses!
Silvia.

Comment by Oweena Scott on 05/05/05

Mandy: Nice change of pace. I think a change for the better. I was expecting another Gaby type story and was pleasently surprised.

Don't get me wrong, I am a Gabby fan and have read all that I can find on the saga and am waiting for you to start the new book.

Comment by Jill Anglin on 11/27/04

This is the first of your writings I have read. I was bore3d so i got outof bed at one am in hte morning and whenI got to your store and I usually do not read serials I decided to just read the first part and if I was not taken in by the substance of the story then I could just click out and go on to something else. I finished all three parts and knew I owed you a comment. It is not normal to read stories like this one, the hero always gets the girla nd he is the one that is usually going through hell, but for his girlfriend to be used as bait and have her mutilated. Most would not write like that it would be sappy with a happy theme. I lie the way you write, suspense and dram, a litle comedy and a great story between introduction and anti climax. Maddy Bell my bonnet is off to you, are you into reviewing other writers material. You have it all down and I am an amateur even though I tutored comprehensive writing in college and wrote the definitive research paper. thank you for taking your time to read this.
God Bless,
Jill Micayla Anglin
PS I have four stories under Jill, please be kind ad read them and tell me how to improve.
Again thnak you
Jill Micayla Anglin

Comment by NoOne on 04/24/04

Interesting to see you posting on this site. I'm used to finding you over on SapphiresPalace. Glad to see you here. Oh yes, and I like the new stories immensely.

Comment by horseman on 02/06/03

A very thoughtful story, that was not run of the mill, a darn good read!
Keep up the good writing.

Comment by Paula on 02/04/03

very good though different than I pictured from the summary.

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