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Changing For Gym: Fitting In
by Maggie Finson

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Comment by Silvia      (from Brazil) on 10/03/09
Hi Maggie!
Finally a good story. I liked, and I hope you could keep writing more stories like this one!
Kisses.
Silvia.
Comment by Vicki Stewart on 12/20/08
Hi Maggie, what a lovely story, I'm really impressed, it's been very well thought out and written, I look forward to reading more stories on your page. Vicki. xx
Comment by Kristi on 06/10/03
A very well-writen story! A somewhat different angle- where a school building is performing the feminization. I liked the way that the changes came- ever so slowly- with just a moment's reluctance and confusion on Lulu's part- then acceptance. There were just a few jolts- as when Lulu's stawberry blonde hair suddenly turned long and black- but, for the most part, the changes were so gradual as to be almost unnoticed- like something you think you might have seen out of the corner of your eye, which quickly  blends in and becomes part of the landscape. I think slow, gentle, patient, almost imperceptible- but ultimately irresistible- feminization is always the best.
Comment by chrisl on 06/09/03
Hi Maggie,
         I really enjoyed this story thanks :)
I bet Xoop has fun reading it as well.
Hugs, chrisl  
Comment by Allie on 06/08/03
Very nice story Maggie.


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