Jimmy may have been small and unable to fight off the wife's friend but once he was home and carol was asleep all he had to do was mix sugar with boiling water and accidently pour it over her face in the morning. Woman are so vain it would have totally destroyed her.

This story ended rather abruptly.

It could be talking about the poelpe you meet online.For example, if a game is rated T only for violence and not language, and you go online and there's a lot of poelpe swearing, then it really shouldn't be rated T. The online community is something game developers usually can't controlIt could also refer to any problems/glitches you find online, such as lag

I think she lost Jimmy!
A woman was born. Elizabeth, and she have a life in front of her to go ahead. I think that she hasn't much time with Carol.
Carol don't deserve Elizabeth, and don't deserve to be happy.
She deserves suffering by what she did to Jimmy!
Silvia.

the story line was intresting the best way to make someone do what you want is to embarass them in the best possible way i enjoyed the story its amazing how calm some one is when transformed well done

Very weak story-line.
Whatever happens should be believable in the environment in which it is presented. In this one there is absolutely no way that Jimmy wouldn't have ripped off the dress etc. as soon as the friend let go of his finger, even if the friend had managed to get him into it in the first place. If the beginning of a story is not believable then the rest falls apart. I guess, one has to assume that Jimmy was a closet transvestite, yawn!    

I really like this one.  From what you sent me, though, this is not the complete story.  You might want to send in the rest again as part2.