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�What �a great and touching fantasy , I don't cross dress (yet????)but if I had understanding lady friends like those �who asked me to ......well who knows !!!! �I may "borrow" you fantasy for myself , it really is the type I could day dream over !!!!!

You know how to write good stories. So, I would like to know why you write something bad like this.
Please, tell me why!
Silvia.

Charlie says Mrs. Driscol is a conservative powerhouse in the community, and later Mrs. Driscol herself says, as a way of saying she wants Charlie to be Melody all the time , "As I have a very conservative reputation in this city to uphold, I can't possibly have her shacking up with a boy, now can I?" �Yet Charlie also says Mrs. D. was, "... the scourge of local chauvinist politicians. She was a tiger when it came to women's rights and fought for every feminist view that came out � even the more unpopular ones."

Which was she? �If the latter, her argument for keeping Charlie in dresses doesn't hold water, as she most likely would have been supporting Juliet's right to live with whomever she liked - male or female.

I also stand by my 2005 comment that Mrs. D's opening remarks to Charlie were inconsistant with her following remarks and behavior.

The story was pretty unrealistic all around. �Charlie completely accepted the whole thing way to easy. �Up to a certain a degree fine, but he was just a total sheep. �"O, you locked my keys in my apartment so I can't escape. �Ok. �I trust you completely even though you trapped me for no reason."

It was pretty bad up until the party. �Then it was really terrible. �No real reaction from him at all after being embarassed. �His only real thought walking in was "Can you take these uncomfortable and unnecessary chains off so I can dance?" �Why put the chains on him? �Too make the walk downstairs awkward for him? �And aparently these girls have never met a man before as they only invited the sensative, sweet male neighbor to a party after dressing him like a baby. �At least he is happy though. �He gets to dance, kiss, and sit on all his neighbors laps. �He is really "learning what it means to be a woman" alright. �All they do is dance and make out. �Awesome right? �It doesn't make any sense. �They are "stripp(ing) away (the) layer of masculinity (he) burdened (him)self with." �What exactly was the burden? �His life seemed to be pretty good no? �He had a steady job, his own apartment, a passion in life (art), and is an all around good guy. �Right, he was trying too hard to be what a man should be. �Their was nothing in his life that was a burden at all. �You even made the standard transformation brainwash dialoge nonsensical:

"Melody, Charlie, those are just names! Male and female, too. You are a very nice person, one I really would like to know."

If there just names, why did you change it? �You obviously wanted him to have a female name to fit the character. �But if they're just names why would you need to change it? �He was just so nice that the female one fit him better right? �Everyone in the apartment must have thought "Hey, this guy is 5' 5'', has long hair, and is nice. �We should definately dress him like a girl. �Thats what he wants right? �He is practically asking for it." �Then, random childhood friend shows up and they live happily ever after. �Actually, no. �The whole childhood friend part was pointless as he ends up with his neighbor? �Why even have the friend there? �It seemed obvious that he was going with the neighbor until she came and then it just switches back? �Utterly retarded. �

its an intersting story but charlie must have wanted something like this to happen little or no resistance at all interesting

SOS!! need help?

CQ!!! Calling all ships?

VVV VVV VVV!!!! Tuning up for what???

<<  "Well, well, well – look at the little pervert we've got! Does the widdle sissy snookums like ums wuvly undies?"  >>

I don't understand why Ms. driscoll spoke to Charlie this way.  It seems inconsistant with her following nice attirude toward him.

Charlie is a lot more trusting than most guys.  I would have liked to have seen what would have happened if he had really put up a fuss; what if, in the bra scene, he had said, if you are really concerned with how I'm feeling, I would be most comfortable with the bra - and the rest of these clothes - off and my regular clothes returned.  Would the girls have used force to continue dressing him?

this is a nice pleasent story everything done with permission and not taken to extremes and a good reward at the end of it as well as a god job &wife great story thankyou

I just happened to re-read the story. I just love how the girls tricked poor Charlie (or Melody) to be their girl and how (s)he became the bride of Cat. I only wonder, did Charlie/Melody ever use those diapers... was (s)he ever again a babygirl...?

Hugs from Sissy Baby Paula and Snowball (my toy puppy)

A very cute story. One that I always fantasized about when I was a young man. I always imagined that 2 or more girls would transform me into a little girl and I would live my life over again as a little girl. Thank you for bringing back pleasant memories.

Nice story. Didn't know whether it would turn out well for the
young man, but it did. But I couldn't figure out the Morse code
inserts in the story....
--Pervy

Fun storey, cute, and a good read. Thanks for the effort.

A very nice ending to a story I wonder where was headed.

Great first part. Bring on the next part soon.

Not a bad start but I'll reserve comment or compliment until read more of the story. As with most of Ann's story the writing is well done and easy to read.