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Charlie Watkins: Control Yourself
by Laurie S.

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Comment by Silvia   (from Brazil) on 07/15/09
Hi Laurie.
Good work, good story.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Billy The Dick on 07/25/01
Hi Laurie,

Great to see that you're writing again. Loved your story - you really got an intelligent und witty style !! Very unique !

Ever thought of a sequel to "Enquring Minds..." ??? Well, bring it on *gg*

See ya

Comment by Sydney on 07/25/01
Once again you have demonstrated that you are a person with entirely too much time on your hands. Let's see, pop music, 60's TV, competition dancing. And oh yeah, Star Wars light and espionage scandals. Are you a terminal insomniac?

Sigh. It makes one envious.

Up to your usual standard, literate, despite an irrepressible love of really horrible puns, descriptive, light, a fun read.

Keep up the good work.

Comment by circe on 07/24/01
laurie, as ever, i loved this.  very sexy, very descriptive (in all the right places!) and lots of fun.

thank you ever so much!!
circe

Comment by Starhawk on 07/24/01
I love the way Laurie weaves a story and brings in imagery.  This one was fun and filled with word play throughout.  Not to mention one very sexy CONTROL agent and his/her cohort Maxwell Smart (one of my favs from a long way back).  Good work Laurie.



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