I'm just new to this site,but i have just finished reading this incredible story.I am a straight male,but the story got me intrigued,i had to read to the end.Congrats to the author,well done Pamela

sgA7ZL Appreciate you sharing, great post.Really thank you! Much obliged.

A lovely story.  I think most of the criticisms are made because it doesn't really have a happy ending.

I could put up with the cruelty and various disgusting antics with and by Aunt Charlotte, but I would have loved to see Linda taking her down a peg or three, and our heroine to be rescued and live with Linda as her maid, wife, lesbian lover or even her husband.  Preferably not visited by Charlotte very often or not at all.

I found this story disturbing and very intense. But also very fascinating.  I found myself unable stop reading and so, finished it in a single nigt.

As I said, I was completely hooked by part 2.  I found Greg's desent into hell at the hands of Aunt Charlotte horrorable.  But would have willingly traded places with him.

Personally I would have wanted to see Aunt Charlotte receieve some sort of Extreme Punishment for what she did to Greg.

All in all, a very good story.

Yugh!

Tales like these should have a very clear header and/or tag indicating that its' contents are of awful explicit offending nature.
The rating X doesn't do it justice, at the very least it should be triple-X.

Somehow it should be made more clear that these type of stories are so utterly twisting and degrading.

It's not that I don't appreciate the prowess of the author, nor do I rally against these stories. Only I would really like to be warned beforehand, so I can skip or decide to read with caution.

Jo-Anne

This ought to be removed from here as it is cruelty to children, paedophilic, illegal and therefore likely to get the whole site closed down.  

The story was too ugly to be read all the way through, but I skipped to the end to see if there was any rescue and there wasn't really.

Whay made it worse was the skill with which it was written, making it sort of believable.  Perverted talent.

Sick.  Yuk.

SHE SHOULD OF BEEN PUT AWAY IN AN INSTITUTION AND NEVER GET OUT SHE IS SICK, THIS MAY BE FICTION BUT THERE ARE REALLY PEOPLE LIKE HER AND THEY ARE VERY SAD PEOPLE, WHAT SHE DID TO THE BOY IS UNTHINKABLE TO NORMAL PEOPLE, THIS TOPIC SHOULD BE APPROACH WITHOUT CRUELTY AND BY THE FAMILY NOT A STRANGER.

I have to agree with Eleanor! You are a good writer but this was a terrible tale! It was well written but the plot was totally sick! I would imagine that things do happen in this way however so it is not unrealistic by any means as many young and even older people will often do anything to receive an attaboy or attagirl! The thing is is that stories like this tend to make any decent person rather sick and angry to think of things such as that! It also sort of made me angry that anyone would even write such a thing as well as made me wonder why in the heck I even read it! I am surprised it was even allowed to be posted on story site for that matter! To me it is just awful! I don't think that I will read any of your stories anytime soon. I am sorry!

I think you have real talent as a writer it's just a shame you have to write stories like this. I don't think it's entertaining or realistic, I don't like to say so, but it's a sick story.
Please try another style this story is NOT a good one.

The author responds lest his silence in any way be interpreted as feeling any remose, regret, shame or apology for having written Charlotte's Niece:

Charlotte's Niece is a work of fiction. Its apparent realism evidently leads some readers to make connections between it and the real world that have no basis in truth and, in fact, say more about their own emotional fears and immaturity than it does about the author or those who actually find it interesting, amusing, moving or whatever. Really now, the only legitimate criticism is whether or not the story follows a logical trajectory, and to the author's mind it does, or he would not have posted it.

In CN, Charlotte is the catalyst Greg needs to investigate the origin of his deepseated impulse toward crossdressing. Those readers who think that the impulse to choose to wear the attire of the opposite gender needs no elaboration are, in my opinion, delusional. Just look in the mirror and think about what is going on and explain to yourself why? The "control and dependency" inflicted on a crossdresser by his desires is different only in magnitude but not in kind from the "control and dependency" that Greg feels at the hand of Charlotte. Charlotte is really just a living vastly amplified expression of Greg's desires useful for exploring complex issues in a dramatic fashion. Charlotte is to be loved for what she has done: yes it was crude and a little tough for the squeamish, but Greg is certainly a better person for having spent the summer with Charlotte. He is much better informed about his desires, better adjusted to other people and the world and, most important of all, happier.

Pamela

two words.... VAGINA PRINCESS, you my friend have some serious issues that I feel should be taken care of by a good psychiatrist ( because, frankly a psychologist would not cut it, you need drugs,good ones,and fast).I thought perhaps you where working through some childhood stress at first but.. well, your not, its obvious that your just a masochistic person with a active imagination.

This is a sick story written to see how sick it could get.

In the real world, she would not get fined. The witch would be in prison or a mental institution. Where she belongs.Her assault on an innocent young boy is CRIMINAL!

I like erotica and write under a couple of names. This is not erotica, this is ***, I don't know what. Not even smut. She should have stopped about 20 Chapters ago. Too long and drawn out for no reason except to be long and drawn out. Then the ending came too quick, and the last part was sick!

Don't mean to be so critical'
Robyn

Dearest Sister Pamela, I hope you are okay and taking good care of yourself.  I must confess to not having liked this story at all.  After reading the first few parts, I would only occasionally take a peek at portions of subsequent chapters, to see if you were continuing to push the envelope.  You certainly were.  It makes me wonder what you intended here.  Was it a great purgative experience, or an experiment in tormenting your readership?  It was a potent mix of fear, pain, loathing, confusion and humiliation.  It seems a significant departure from your earlier work.  I wonder what's changed.  I truly hope you are okay, not only physically, but emotionally.  You have many friends and supporters out here in the world who really do care about you.  We need you to look after yourself.

refreshing episode

so much darkness seems to have passed

but Linda, poor foolish linda,

her actions doomed Vickie

too bad she's not bright enough to see that

and vickie, too hurt inside to even talk to linda

the level of cruelty is getting to be a little high, after all, the kid is supposed to be a bright boy, but he's being torn down all the time.  at some point you break someone and they either become lost forever(comatose, listless), backlash (violence, and not just slaps and hits, planned out viciousness), or flee

I'm still rooting for greg, but no longer rooting so much for vivkie to survive, just greg

This story started out so well, but has gone beyond stupid.
Look the kid is supposed to be a genius. I think he has enough brain cells to see where this was leading a long time ago and to know he is being abused by these crazy women.
Have his mother and father come home unexpectedly and catch her and her friends abusing GREG and beat her ass then call the cops.

i didn't take long to notice the direction of this series of story was going downhill. and yes, i've never read since then cause i know how stupid it's going to be and my suspicion is confirmed with other readers' comments.

i just hope Pamela just ends this stupid story as soon as possible to save losing more face. it's just stupid. sorry for being harsh, but the truth is the truth.

Good story but this boy /girl is going to end up badly hurt by so called responsible adults.

I loved this story when it started and it becomes even more enjoyable as you develop it.  Oh how I wish I could be a vagina princess.

  This is a remarkable and powerful story. That it's beginning to lose some of it's readership implies there are some boundaries being addressed that ordinarily aren't found among the usual fare.
   I respect the unease of some of the readers but for me...I am absolutely captivated by the story and the skill of the writer. If there are other stories as well written or of a similar flavor please let me know.

This story is turning sick and possibly a little perverted.  It started off interesting but is nothing but exploitation.  I will not be reading anymore of them.

I kind of agree with KF on this, charlotte's whims are just getting strange and it's becoming fairly obvious that she's got a few screws loose and greg's starting to lose it too.

I liked chapters 13 and 14 because it looked like something interesting was going to happen but now he's just playing charlotte's maid :(

It will be interesting when reality comes back into the picture :)

Up to chapter 4 or 5 it was a pretty good story. From there it was partly downhill to about chapter 10 to 12 and now, at chapter 17, it's just plain stupid.

The initial plot was really good and promising. As of now it's ship wreck. Do a 'Dallas' on it and have Greg wake up from a bad dream or just stop writing.

Personally I'll continue to read, just because I'm curious about just how stupid it will eventually get.

ok, maybe I'm hogging the comments

I read 16

lovely addition, the action at the end was a bit shocking though

and giving up the math research?  to waste a gift like that seems ver very wrong.  

also, is Charlotte really that far off the deep end?  some of her earliest comments in this chapter to Vickie seem a little looney

Another great addition

I'm starting to feel concerned for Ethel as well as Vikie
Charlotte doesn't even seem to blink when confronted with her own brutality

Ethel definitely has the mindset of a battered spouse

part 13

lucky 13

shades of nightmares past

great story, but painful to read

just read 12


poor confused kid

and lying to Linda, that's going to be horrible for him/her in the future

I wonder if Charlotte's treating him as the hired help is going to continue

I hope not, but still....

great story, thank you for it

Pamela,
          Got me hooked, like a mackeral on a bobber.  Superb.  It's an absolute pleasure to hit the site, and see a new edition.  I'm learning so much from your technique.  Thanks.  And... good fishing.
Gabrielle

Just read ch 10

what a ride.  an emotional roller coaster.

when it got to the point where the girls see him, I had to stop, because it was such a tense moment.

Definitely a great story, I can't wait for the next one

I love your story and i am always happy to see there is a new parts it well writen and keeps me comming for more
thank you.

I wonder how they conned Lei into not blabbing (or she still tells her parents and something else happens)

You would think if Charlotte does care for her 'neice' that she'd know better than to have these confrontations in front of Lei, thereby forcing Greg to be strong.

Of course, as a strong willed individual, she's probably used to her own way.

At this point, Charlotte and Ehel had better be more afraid of him running away then of hurting him.  (not quite sure he's been forced to be helpless enough to try suicide yet)

oh well, excellent story, can't wait for part 9

I have to agree with schumeded.  Anyone who thought like Greg would tell Charlotte to take a hike and sleep on Linda's floor until the obnoxious bitch (Charlotte) came to her senses.  And he would make some effort to contact his mother to get him the hell away from this awful situation.

Great story

It's amazing how well it's written with such a fast turnaround time

I can't wait until the next one

Keep up the good work. I am eagerly waiting for each new installment. schumedud doesn't realize that "contradictions" lead to greater characterization. A wonderful slow, nuanced yet enticing story.

please, can you stop writing? it was an interesting story beginning from part 1-3, 4 was so so but when i reached part 5, it was the killer..... to the reader.

the story goes from interesting to totally unbelieavable. greg don't really feel like wearing panties and this is reinforced by his mom but then goes ahead cause he's afraid of charlotte and wants to make his mom happy by following charlotte's orders?? come on....

almost all the characters in the story contradicts his/her-self and never keeps to their word even when they mentioned that they will in a serious tone thus making this story too unrealistic and hard to swallow.

better luck next time. this is one reader who WON'T continue with this story.

I really enjoy the slow and methodical yet realistic pace of development you present.  It is a very relistic approach to what must be done to create our lad's acceptance of the fate from which he cannot escape and must ultimatly endorse. Pressure to change from many sources is the key to his acceptance.   Keep writing.