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The Cherry Queen
by Cheri Reed

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Comment by crorkz on 08/03/14
RHVaVw Thanks a lot for the article.Thanks Again. Really Great.

Comment by Cindy Satin on 09/10/11
I do not know whether the story is original or not but it is quite pleasant. I'm sure Jamie looked very sweet in his pink gown and (s)he had been very properly corsetted!

Comment by Silvia. on 07/16/11
Disgustig and very bad story.

Comment by Mistress Meredith on 07/28/08
While the story may or may not have appeared elsewhere, the plain truth is no town could function under such circumstances. That said, however, it was certainly a delightful little tale filled with nuggets of forced feminization and himiliation. It would be more original (if the story was indeed plagerized) for this author to continue with poor James' (Jim's) year in frocks, and most importantly, his summer as French maid in his girl friend's home.

Comment by Wanda on 11/16/06
The other three readers are correct. This story appeared in "Teased, Tormented and Transformed" in 1979.

Comment by juliliej on 07/06/06
an interesteting but short story i wish it had been me comes to mind it was a good way to disapline the boys what a way to go well done more please

Comment by Wish it had happened to me on 11/28/04
I love this story. I don?t understand the commotion among all these biddies. Fantasy fiction is fantasy; and fiction. Nobody said it should really be done anywhere. Of course scarcely a parent on earth would permit it, neither would any judge or politician. Facts just don?t have any effect on hysterical people, and I see a several commenting on this story as if it were fact.
Most of the stories on this site are about forced feminization. We all want to be forced to do what we really want to do. In fact, if this idea were ever implemented, there would be a full quota of boys who secretly want to be girls trying to get low grades and being the biggest discipline problems. So, what is the fuss?

Comment by jasmine on 11/27/04
Lidice which was mispelled was a town that was raised to the ground and most of the people living it it were killed in 1942 by germany.

you seem to think that the answer for male violence to female is destruction of males and sexual humiliation and even rape. i could imagine a massive and violent backlash if a program like that were really instituted nationwide. and many suicides. and unlike today, the males in that time would have a valid reason for there hatred of females.


Comment by leah on 11/27/04
Well, I did read the whole thing, and I generally agree with the negative critiques. On the other hand, I see many similarities with "bad boy to good girl" stories on this site and several others.

Whoever the author might be, s/he has kind of gone off the deep end on this story. On the other hand, s/he would have a response to those critiques: Look at all the damage and violence perpetrated upon girls and women in real life! We've just GOT to figure out how to raise our young men to be good people and productive citizens.

I'm not sure of the meaning of jasmine's LITICE, but she also pointed to the story situation here with the word "ominous"; I would submit that that certainly describes the sorry status of a significant portion of today's young males (both in the USA and in most other countries).

Comment by Jane Hudson on 11/23/04
Interesting story .New flash large number of boys in this town have gone TS or killed themselfs.One girl/boy at the contest went back stage when lost and had to live as girl shot his girlfriend judge in the head then himself. Also large number of boy s have no longer any thing to do with girls rather having boys girls wonderwhy. ONE GIRL BOY ARRESTED FOR KILLING 4 GIRLS WITH CARVING KNIVE LATE AT NIGHT. Another girlboy steals dads high power rifle 12 dead.All girl or womenI know its a story but!!! at lest one of these boy would or morewould go wacko or at lest end up very sexual confused.Still its a story and none the worse for that

Comment by REDSTONE on 11/23/04
I DID NOT READ ALL OF THIS STORY. IT HAS NO PLACE HERE IT SHOULD BE DELETED

Comment by Pippa K. on 11/21/04
As Crystal said in her posting notes, there's a question about this author, as to authorship.  I'm not sure if this link will work, http://tinyurl.com/7xf88 , but it's a message that was posted to alt.sex.stories.tg by Madrabbit in 1996 with the exact story.  He, in turn, attributes it to an old BBS system in L.A., Cross Connection.  The author on that BBS was "unknown."  If for no other reason than the earlier posting date, than the claimed "copyright" date by this author, there should be some suspicion about ownership.  Having once been published anonymously, this story has also been lifted for profit, and appeared in NWL-28.  I don't think this necessarily means that the story doesn't belong here, but rightfully it appears the author name should be changed to "Unknown".

Comment by Angel O'Hare on 11/20/04
This reads familiar to me and I had left a comment for it once before somewhere.

Anyway, this is a very cruel story and reads like a fantasy. To destroy childrens lives with their mothers approval is just a step away from being an executioner. Slow torcher and destroying the bodies and minds of individuals no matter the sex and no matter the suppossed crime is just well, perverted.

To finish the story off with the sexual dominence was the straw that really snapped.

These types of stories I truly believe should have a warning preceeding the opening of the story. Like; this story is pure fantasy and no way should it be read as a real life situation.

Huggles
Angel

Comment by Ken on 11/20/04
Interesting story. I'm curious as to where the story will take Jamie(I think that's her name). In society this would never happen, but that's why this is called fiction. Keep the story going. I think it will get even bettet as it time goes on.

Comment by jasmine on 11/19/04
this town is destroying so many lives that i feel sorow when i read it. i know many years in the future, this town will face a massive civil suit or class action from there victims.

but for me its not enough, one ominous word comes to mind for the conspiracy that the whole town is participating in. LITICE



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