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Chick Car
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Comment by Aleesha on 08/04/10
What a great story but it is a pity there are not more cars like that as a lot of guys would be queuing to buy one. Comment by Dianna on 03/16/08 I liked this one, mostly because it went against the grain of the forced femme cliche. Instead of the girlfriend/mother/sister/wife trying to force the change, Nina was trying to prevent and even reverse it! That shows real love, even if there was nothing they could do in the end. Great work sugar. Comment by Cathy on 08/30/03 Always looking for a *cause* that is unique and this one has it. Good show and RIPE for a sequel for what really happened to the car and the next victim who, for all we know, might be the little brother of the tough Nina gave it to. Comment by Colleen on 08/05/03 Now this one was a pleasure to read. Simple, well-told, and mildly comic. Comment by Terri on 08/05/03 Interesting twist to the all-too-familiar forced fem theme- one of the few stories I've read where the girlfriend is trying to reverse the changes,rather than cause them. I agree that there is room for a sequel- in which we find out what really happened to the car, and to the next person who owned it. By the way- I don't suppose Jennifer would be willing to divulge the make and model of the chick car, would she? (Just out of curiosity, of course). Comment by Jet on 08/05/03 Pretty good. Pretty good. Comment by Dementia Notmeyou on 08/05/03 i certainly hope that you continue this story, and tell us what happened to the guy that took the car. I'd love to see how that turned out. Perhaps it turned a gang of punks into cheerleaders, or a female biker gang, or something. |
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