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Child's Play
by Kelly Davidson

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Comment by me suba on 10/25/19
ZTcRoP posted at this web site is actually pleasant.

Comment by anonymous reviewer on 11/15/16
Truly one of the all-time great CD stories, and one I keep coming back to, so full of heart, love, tenderness, and understanding.

I especially enjoyed the wedding gown scene, and tied to picture the boy trying to march with his little bare legs caressed by the voluminous soft gown.

Tell the truth now - would this story be half as interesting if it described a little girl being helped by a kindly neighbor lady to try on mens' business suits?


Comment by Shadow Walker on 09/15/16
You brought me right into the story and I felt like I was there even to the end  so sad  thank---you was very good

Comment by crorkz on 08/04/14
WpqQ2b Thank you ever so for you post.Really thank you! Great.

Comment by crorkz on 08/03/14
KimHpv Major thankies for the post.Much thanks again. Will read on...

Comment by thisisme on 02/11/14
Excellent story. I had a little trouble with the last part where the thoughts about not going to bed together came up, but I realize this is something that would pass through a guys mind. There is a lot of realism in this story.

Comment by only for 5 dollars on 09/12/13
oAQMqu Thanks-a-mundo for the post.Really looking forward to read more.

Comment by KariAnne on 11/02/12
Thank you for taking me to a time and place that I never had. Wonderful story.

Comment by Davida on 11/20/09
    Dear Kelly,

  I just read your story, and it is wonderful! Thank you for sharing your sweet and beautiful memories.


Comment by carla michelle on 11/04/08
i really enjoyed the story. it was endearing. thank you

Comment by lee lee on 06/01/08
Truth is sometimes better than fiction when  we recall the reality of our fantasies. Your story was wonderful. My experience was with my step mother  who when I  was 8 realized my desire to be a girl and helped me through it in a dear sweet and loving way.  The two of us would spend some wonderful weekends together until I was about 15 and she abruptly refused to participate but made sure that I had a pretty dress in my size and lingerie  in a section of her drawers until I finally left for college. She passed away when I was 22 but of course the memory of our mother daughter days are very real even now.  Thank you for sharing your experience in such a well written piece

Comment by Molly on 09/20/06
There is a subtle difference between even the cleverest and most subtle fictional account and a narrative told simply and directly from memory. Despite the disclaimers of this site, I am persuaded that this is no fiction, but a recounting of the author's actual experience. One can see the influence of this experience in another of the author's stories, "The Reluctant Performer," which is clearly fictional. My goodness, what a memory to treasure and to hold close! I sure wish I was that Jeff, instead of this one...

Comment by Debilyn on 06/14/06
Possibly the sweetest, tenderest story on this entire site.  Every boy should have grown up next door to a Mrs. Smith who could have introduced them in a non-damaging way to the delicious glories of girlhood, perhaps the greatest of which is - and let's admit it, now - bare thighs swathed in pettis and crinies and bare legs exposed to the elements, with no hint of pant material. A true paean to the days when, if a fine lady or girl referred to her "pants", she usually meant her lacy underdainties.  I can identify with angry, demanding, performance-oriented, whack-it-outta-ya parents, too, and the need for some kind of compassionate escape. Thank you.

Comment by TANYA on 02/24/04
SUCH A BEAUTIFUL STORY. WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE LIKE THIS

Comment by g on 07/06/03
Good sweet story, warm too. I liked it. do another one like it.

Comment by Barbara Lynn Terry on 03/31/03
I just loved this story. There are so many points that remind me of when I was growing up. I was actually putting myself into Susanna'a character as the story progreesed. I am a post-op TS and have been for 34 years comes this November. However, I have lived my life full time as a girl from the age of seven, which was back in 1955. I had a lot of accpetance and support not only from my family, but from most of the people in my hometown in the midwest. That is why I identified with most of the points in this story. The only thing is, I never balked at being dressed like a girl, doing girl things, or going outside dressed as a girl. I totally accepted who I was to become and did it gladly. You h ave written one heck of a story. Please keep up the good work.

Barbara Lynn Terry

Comment by Diane Sutton on 12/08/01
Oh, I loved the story as it had so much to give to the reader. I liked having Lisa's mother help with the dressing and the loving care that she gave when transforming Susana.

The ending I would have liked changed as I would have enjoyed reading more of the adventures that I'm sure would have taken place but, I do understand it was appropriate for an ending and it was a good one.

Comment by NJ on 11/02/01
Good story, well written kept my interest to the end.  Makes you want to read others of Kelly's.  Ending was great.

Comment by Donna on 10/25/01
A warm beautiful story. A story that doesn't rely on fantasy, yet the same effect is achieved in such a believable manner.

Comment by Julie on 06/17/01
  One of the sweetest stories I have ever read .... Thank you Kelly

                                  Hugs,
                                  Julie

Comment by Annie O on 06/14/01
This is something I would guess any one of us would love to have happen to them. A wonderful story, and, I believe, true!
  I do wish this had happened to me years ago, as I might be a lot different today!

Comment by Cissy Gaye on 06/02/01
Absolutely wonderful!  Sweet, sensitive and, in the end, so very poignant.  Without doubt, the most touching TG story I've ever read.  A work of art.  Bravo!

Comment by Ann Newton on 06/02/01
I believe it happened just as you wrote it. What a wonderful story. I would never want anyone to tell me it was not true and destroy the wonder of it all.  Thanks.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 06/01/01
Tender and sweet stories like this makes my heart feel so good on a bad day.

Comment by emmie dee on 06/01/01
A very tender story with a powerful ending--it made me misty-eyed!



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