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The Chinese Secret
by Ellie Dauber

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Comment by Tina Michelle Smith on 09/16/03
I enjoyed this story tremendously.  It is an interesting twist on "The Manchurian Candidate."  Perhaps it is all the more interesting because some close friends of mine have adopted a Chinese girl who has been in the USA for about seven years now.
I am also reminded of a scene from a Three Stooges film in which the knuckleheads are turned over to a team of Chinese doctors to be brainwashed.  The Stooges don't change, but the doctors end up smacking each other and poking each others' eyes out.  Another case of decedant capitalism ultimately prevailing.
Keep writing, Ellie.  This is one of the most imaginative TG stories I have ever read.

Comment by Jane Hudson on 09/12/03
Great story loved it

Comment by Tanya Lynn on 09/12/03
loved it- this was very funny and touching.  but, for those of us who are already paranoid- haha.  I only wish it had been a serial- maybe some of the others decided to fight?  i have some friends who have adopted and i am sure i will never look at their girls the same way again.  Again, a great story



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