Sorry, STORY was I wanted to say.
Silvia.

Where is the storty????????????????????????????
Silvia.

as per per my previous comments

to short not enough desciption a lot more explanition needed& a few spelling mistakes could have done a lot more to this story

Too brief to be of quality high
A snippet of prose a fading sigh
Two boys stripped bare
Why should we care
I can ignore the next round. Oh Fie!

I agree with Susan the story lacks all !!

Not a story, not even a chapter. left everything hanging in mid air

Oh, girl, what have you done, Nikki?

1.You have invented in just one brief story several English words I've never seen before and can only guess at.
2."Chris" as a boy's nickname I can believe, but never "Jo." That you get to Jo as the story unfolds, I can understand, but surely not at the very beginning.
3.I hope you made it to the dentist or the gynecologist on time, because you sure cut corners here to save time (and effort?). What beginning? What ending? What middle for that matter?

Most feminization stories are told in such a way that the reader fully comes to understand the folly of young men's actions. The development (none here, I fear) of the tension between mother and sons could have been used to help us see what the parent was up against -- and how devilish the two imps here.

And for a conclusion you have school staff rip off the boys' clothing, and they are left there with nothing else left in the story. Were the staff vicious and rough, or were they sexy and embarrassingly beautiful? Your "ending" says that you know we've all read stories like this, so obviously we know what comes next. No. No.

That's why we bother to read these stories: to see what YOU say comes next. And if we find it engaging enough (find pleasure in it) to read on to the end, then we feel we have a winner and don't feel that we have wasted our time. What feeling do you suppose your readers are going to gather from this (all too) brief effort?